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"Callousness of my own Blackhole."

If I took you to the place
where I stand alone
Would you take this love
and shred it to the core

If you connived your way
past my defenses, would
you rend everything of me,
leaving me senseless

Sometimes less is more,
especially when giving in
can take us to the place
where there's no ending and
no,

Genesis

It seems like its always been
this way and will be,

Evermore

Where breathing is constricted
and the frozen breaths that we
exhale seem to come from our
souls but come out with no
passion...

Only lifelessness that is so
fucking,

Cold

So if I let you into that place where
I comfortably sit...

My own blackhole

Would you take this love that I have
for it and rend it, taking away all that
I enjoy

Because this is my misery and unless
you want to give it some company
then don't try to disenjoin me from its...

Serenity
Written by hungrypan74 (Dantalyon)
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