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I'M MELTING
(Inspired by Earth_Child's "Silent As Snow"}
Me, frozen solid
awaiting peaceful release
by your heat thawed
Me, frozen solid
awaiting peaceful release
by your heat thawed
Published 13th Sep 2014
| Edited 21st Feb 2018
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14th Sep 2014 00:40am
Gahdess_Worship, luv :-* ~
This is such a touching piece. There's fear here too (don't release your hold on everything, just jettison the baggage), a sense of quiet trepidation, but such tremendous possibility, luv. Verdant potential... :-*
This is such a touching piece. There's fear here too (don't release your hold on everything, just jettison the baggage), a sense of quiet trepidation, but such tremendous possibility, luv. Verdant potential... :-*
14th Sep 2014 00:59am
I'll admit that it reads more ominous than I intended. I wanted the reader to interpret the second line however they may.
Thank you so much for your constant compassion...I truly appreciate your words of wisdom and comfort.
Thank you so much for your constant compassion...I truly appreciate your words of wisdom and comfort.
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- Edited 14th Sep 2014 9:12am
14th Sep 2014 8:07am
ohh my...
to think my little scribble evoked this magical brevity
~blushyface
this reads like snowflakes, unique each time i try to find meaning or a pattern from the first visit
ominous [?] maybe
beautiful [?] definitely
to think my little scribble evoked this magical brevity
~blushyface
this reads like snowflakes, unique each time i try to find meaning or a pattern from the first visit
ominous [?] maybe
beautiful [?] definitely
14th Sep 2014 8:42am
You are constantly inspiring me.It is a beautiful thing how the touch of another soul can thaw the coldest of hearts,
15th Sep 2014 00:38am
15th Sep 2014 2:46am
Thank you Mana-T. Clever name BTW :) I'l assume your comment is a positive "Wow" LOL.I appreciate the support.
