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L'appolonide
in my dream, she’s always there
she’s a woman, like any woman
the waking truth of passion
flesh of a man’s fantasy
if she denies my entry to her temple
I become the barbarian
storming her gates. invader
so demanding are my wants
so great is my need
but mostly, in the dream, she remains passive
the allure of her nudity speaks for her
regard not the red flag
we advance to battle without armor
hearts naked & defenseless
artillery is silent, no flares besmudge the sky
a woman, wise to carnal madness
she bears my savagery with tolerance
we wound each other with the rage of kisses
I come to her bravely
but more courageous, to myself…
Published 13th Sep 2014
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13th Sep 2014 8:05am
Those moments barbarism followed by sweet surrender can be the most passionate ... Sometimes I don't even let her take off her skirt
Anonymous
13th Sep 2014 10:31am
I no dat gyrl in da pictshure
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Roach
13th Sep 2014 11:25am
Poetical dreams come true, reading your wonderfully rich and passionate poem, John. Your wording is perfect and emotional as always!
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13th Sep 2014 3:19pm
Excellent write, John! Love these lines:
a woman, wise to carnal madness
she bears my savagery with tolerance
we wound each other with the rage of kisses
a woman, wise to carnal madness
she bears my savagery with tolerance
we wound each other with the rage of kisses
13th Sep 2014 6:48pm
Anonymous
13th Sep 2014 8:16pm
The way you describe this passion back and forth is like playing a musical instrument, pleading, coaxing, driving, pushing, pulling till you find the right tempo, the beat ..building to the finale, the big O :)
The way you write John on the art of lovemaking, all men should take lessons from you!!!
The way you write John on the art of lovemaking, all men should take lessons from you!!!
14th Sep 2014 9:43am
a woman JF who loves you...loves the feel of you...she cannot deny...therefore lets you inside...
15th Sep 2014 9:14pm
Passive is the aggressor knowing how to twirl you 'round juuuuuust right. :D
5 Woodies....well done!!
5 Woodies....well done!!
16th Sep 2014 5:23pm
"the waking truth of passion
flesh of a man’s fantasy"- love that verse! His visage is that of passionate determination to partake of her. It's another stunning look at carnal discretion.
flesh of a man’s fantasy"- love that verse! His visage is that of passionate determination to partake of her. It's another stunning look at carnal discretion.
17th Sep 2014 4:23pm
18th Sep 2014 4:07pm
does take a certain type of woman to make a man "feel" like a man...and vice versa !!!
i enjoyed this immensely :)Bravo Sir
i enjoyed this immensely :)Bravo Sir
