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Eddie Buer meets Haiku.

Good write.

Glad you enjoyed it ... Thanks for the read and comment.

Imagery of the finest, LSP. Like it a lot!

Thank you for the read Chiyo ... I heard this coming winter is going to worse than the horrors of the last ... the poem just evolved.  

the ability to say a lot with few words is always admirable bro....

well done man....

That's what I enjoy most about this form (haiku) ... It dictates brevity.  Thanks for read and comment Brotha

has a military covert feel to it

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It's interesting you point that out because I did a couple of haiku that were messages about the holocaust and the occupation juxtaposed against autumn and winter ...

... There is a subtext about a brutal end to something that starts soft and innocent ... like most wars.

YO, poet

i enjoyed that milky chill
with those flakes

I'm glad you enjoyed the piece bro, but I hated this past winter and the one predicted for the future ...

There are those moments of silent beauty when it falls but the aftermath is horrid.

Thanks for the read & comment.

LSP,

Love how your last line leaves the reader with many paths to wander down. Enjoyed!

tornado

Thanks for taking part of this journey Mr. T

I've always liked the saying,
'as White as the driven snow...'

not that it's particularly white,
once it's been driven over...

She does loses her virginity rather harshly ... Thanks for the read

Beautiful. I love haikus and have only recently started writing them.

I love the art form ... Thanks for the read & comment

it does have a military feel to it; invasion of soldiers or willful weather...

We were definitely under siege in the northeast this past winter

Thank you for reading my poem.
I liked this haiku.

It was my pleasure.  Glad you enjoyed this ink.