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Diversions
She painted me a picture
Of a beautiful scene
Told me it was heaven
Past the wilting green
Painted the sunset purple
Because of the royal hues
Swirled the clouds around the sky
To make it seem all fused
The silhouette was waving goodbye
The ship was sailing away
The ocean was wearing its caps
As my love drifted astray
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Of a beautiful scene
Told me it was heaven
Past the wilting green
Painted the sunset purple
Because of the royal hues
Swirled the clouds around the sky
To make it seem all fused
The silhouette was waving goodbye
The ship was sailing away
The ocean was wearing its caps
As my love drifted astray
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
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6th Sep 2014 8:52pm
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Yes an Event Horizon in the making. Thanks for stopping in Broomie. You're always welcome here.
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Love the allusion of an event horizon - its always just out of reach. A very nice diversion and a lovely poem.
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Anonymous
7th Sep 2014 3:31am
What vision you paint before our wandering souls. Just beautiful!!! Xo :)
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Anonymous
11th Sep 2014 00:10am
I know it is......but you wrote it so beautiful it almost hid the sadness behind it. Xo :)
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Anonymous
7th Sep 2014 9:06am
Love is the skyline between Heaven and hell
Enjoyed your poem!
Enjoyed your poem!
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7th Sep 2014 8:37pm
An intoxicating bitter-sweetness which is appertain to love in transit. Enjoyed the "painting".
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