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Temples
Bereft of blackened heart,
Lifting veiled discretion,
singular in note..
the music of a lovers dance
purifying hearts about to sing
In Jerusalem temples
in god we trust
with you I dance
my veil removed.
Lifting veiled discretion,
singular in note..
the music of a lovers dance
purifying hearts about to sing
In Jerusalem temples
in god we trust
with you I dance
my veil removed.
Published 3rd Sep 2014
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3rd Sep 2014 9:35pm
4th Sep 2014 6:14am
4th Sep 2014 5:24pm
Rose, luv :-* ~
I keep hesitating to write for the thoughts filling my mind as I read this piece over and over are such contradictions - the sacred and the profane... ;-*
I keep seeing and feeling wisps of Salome and Esther intertwined and intermingled here, hints, teases, whispers coalescing in the shadows...
As you can see, I'm filled with whimsy and mysticism today. :-p
Your poem is remarkable: thought-provoking, sensual, mystical, esoteric, and yes, sacred.
Excellently done, luv. :-*
I keep hesitating to write for the thoughts filling my mind as I read this piece over and over are such contradictions - the sacred and the profane... ;-*
I keep seeing and feeling wisps of Salome and Esther intertwined and intermingled here, hints, teases, whispers coalescing in the shadows...
As you can see, I'm filled with whimsy and mysticism today. :-p
Your poem is remarkable: thought-provoking, sensual, mystical, esoteric, and yes, sacred.
Excellently done, luv. :-*
4th Sep 2014 6:27pm
9th Sep 2014 4:51pm
It's a beautiful sight!
I don't know why, but I imagine myself dancing very soon in a mesh white shirt concealing a white bikini in celebration of something beautiful.
I don't know why, but I imagine myself dancing very soon in a mesh white shirt concealing a white bikini in celebration of something beautiful.
9th Sep 2014 6:54pm
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