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I fail her all the time
Slowly I slumber in cries, my life awakens.
The tears of failure swallowed within comfort.
Blue marble eyes glitter a thousand stars that
lights dreams of vast changing ocean blue tides.
She never waved a farewell but words with love.
Vacant soul to be filled by new life found
The tears of failure swallowed within comfort.
Blue marble eyes glitter a thousand stars that
lights dreams of vast changing ocean blue tides.
She never waved a farewell but words with love.
Vacant soul to be filled by new life found
Published 1st Sep 2014
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1st Sep 2014 5:05am
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Anonymous
1st Sep 2014 5:27am
What a beautiful poem to someone you care deeply for. I like this very much. :)
1st Sep 2014 7:00am
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1st Sep 2014 7:02am
1st Sep 2014 7:17am
My pleasure, I will be by to read more of you tomorrow ")
have a great night!
Broomie
have a great night!
Broomie
1st Sep 2014 7:22am
It's the emptiness that's killing me. But as I'm always saying, "Every heart belongs to someone else". Good write.
2nd Sep 2014 1:31am
In most cases your right? and thank you so much for your time greatly appreciated:)
1st Sep 2014 8:54pm
Amazing, breathtaking, deep, sincere. There is true emotion in this piece that is played out so well with every handcrafted line. This is a definite favorite and one of your best works. Keep writing man, you are keeping me inspired to log in and write some stuff haha
2nd Sep 2014 1:36am
Mikey I know you uunderstand...your eencouragement is so inspiring...keep up the hard work you are doing my friend...I feel that you've grown a lot (in good way)...we do inspire each other my friend...xoxo xoxo nothing gay just fyi
Thanks bro i feel the love. I needed it for sure, you are such a good friend. I appreciate your support so much, it means the world to me. I really enjoy your work and kind words, i hope the best for you bro
