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Romance and A Song
memories folded within a fragrance
almost forgotten like lovers first kiss
embraces tight remembered so well
A song repeated romancing her heart
black tears in remembrance of when
romantic words spoken love's bouquet
evoked restless needs yet unmet
melting the khol around her eyes
the song went on, lover's dance
no romance tonight a memory whispered
no slow dance against glittery curtains
no cigarettes shared with the wan moon
Folded on warm sheets embracing loneliness
she spiraled out into dreamland
walking hand in hand with the One
wishing she would never wake up.
almost forgotten like lovers first kiss
embraces tight remembered so well
A song repeated romancing her heart
black tears in remembrance of when
romantic words spoken love's bouquet
evoked restless needs yet unmet
melting the khol around her eyes
the song went on, lover's dance
no romance tonight a memory whispered
no slow dance against glittery curtains
no cigarettes shared with the wan moon
Folded on warm sheets embracing loneliness
she spiraled out into dreamland
walking hand in hand with the One
wishing she would never wake up.
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Re: Romance and A Song
30th Aug 2014 7:11pm
Such a quiet Write -perfect for nighttime :)
Emotive Beauty that's full of Heart-Dream Beautiful but do please wake so You may live out those Dreams :)
Touching Ink!!!
Emotive Beauty that's full of Heart-Dream Beautiful but do please wake so You may live out those Dreams :)
Touching Ink!!!
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30th Aug 2014 7:23pm
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30th Aug 2014 7:30pm
Re: Romance and A Song
30th Aug 2014 11:39pm
We all have those dreams we never want to wake up from Grace,here is a beautiful description of one of them.
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31st Aug 2014 00:29am
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31st Aug 2014 8:58am
Re: Romance and A Song
31st Aug 2014 3:22pm
Very romantic and lovely opening lines:
"memories folded within a fragrance
almost forgotten like lovers first kiss
embraces tight remembered so well
A song repeated romancing her heart"
Those happy memories are the ones that you always dream of and would not want to wake up from! Excellent write as always, Grace.
@EngrVV
"memories folded within a fragrance
almost forgotten like lovers first kiss
embraces tight remembered so well
A song repeated romancing her heart"
Those happy memories are the ones that you always dream of and would not want to wake up from! Excellent write as always, Grace.
@EngrVV
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re: Re: Romance and A Song
31st Aug 2014 6:06pm
Thank you so much for reading me EngrVV. Memories of then, gold tinted polished repeatedly through the years by recollections. It was so beautiful then. Wasn't it. :)
re: re: Re: Romance and A Song
31st Aug 2014 6:28pm
Yes it was...how I wish I could relive those past moments in my life!
@EngrVV
@EngrVV
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Re: Romance and A Song
31st Aug 2014 8:44pm
Bittersweet memories of a past seem to
lie dormant in the mind specifically for when one needs a pick me up... Nice work sweetheart :)
lie dormant in the mind specifically for when one needs a pick me up... Nice work sweetheart :)
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31st Aug 2014 11:33pm
Re: Romance and A Song
1st Sep 2014 7:28am
Grace, you always have such amazing poems, the flow is always outstanding. Thank you for sharing your gift through these works.
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re: Re: Romance and A Song
1st Sep 2014 9:27am
I'm happy that you read my poem. Thank you so much for dropping by, AcesofSpades.:)
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1st Sep 2014 8:14am
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