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the unchained dream
life’s tariffs and certain voyage
is the unkindliest cut of all;
my indices breathes the pearls
that came to lounge upon his cheek,
and he came to look not knowing
I woke, and kneeled down to
whisper love things over my body,
as the ship slumbers in the water;
spend your glacier eyes, eternity
opens to sing the unchained dream,
for it is much too long for the night.
is the unkindliest cut of all;
my indices breathes the pearls
that came to lounge upon his cheek,
and he came to look not knowing
I woke, and kneeled down to
whisper love things over my body,
as the ship slumbers in the water;
spend your glacier eyes, eternity
opens to sing the unchained dream,
for it is much too long for the night.
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Re: the unchained dream
Anonymous
24th Aug 2014 10:24am
Youse wrote a good won

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25th Aug 2014 1:59am
Re: the unchained dream
24th Aug 2014 1:53pm
Poetic verses which unleash my mind so as to follow your unchained dream. A beautiful write, Pishashee!
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25th Aug 2014 2:00am
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25th Aug 2014 2:02am
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24th Aug 2014 2:24pm
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Re: the unchained dream
24th Aug 2014 4:26pm
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25th Aug 2014 2:19am
Dreams are those spine tingling dilapidated buildings that are hidden deep in the woods of the supernatural with a darkened entrance with a sign stated: Free Hugs. Charmed I'm sure..:) Heffalumps and Woozles are about as scary as I can go...
Re: the unchained dream
24th Aug 2014 7:43pm
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If you're the cause of that rock...knock it off..:)not unless you're willing to roll with it of course...sometimes there just isn't enough music in the world..