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Pulling the Cord
My wants
Colourful
your dressing gown
that pull cord
when I'm low enough
slowing down
taking in beautiful views
the rush of excitement
blood pumping
heart beating
Uncoded needs
falling to the ground
going down
For you
These are my wants
Colourful
your dressing gown
that pull cord
when I'm low enough
slowing down
taking in beautiful views
the rush of excitement
blood pumping
heart beating
Uncoded needs
falling to the ground
going down
For you
These are my wants
Published 23rd Aug 2014
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23rd Aug 2014 2:25pm
Uncoded needs falling to the ground ... LOVE that line. Wonderful piece.
23rd Aug 2014 2:31pm
23rd Aug 2014 4:34pm
Rose, the skydiving metaphor is fascinating..."taking in the beautiful views"...oh my what beautiful, alluring views worth diving into. Well done Rose.
23rd Aug 2014 5:42pm
Yes very revealing Gahd
Reminds me of presents and ribbons
oh the joy of it all!
Hehe
Reminds me of presents and ribbons
oh the joy of it all!
Hehe
23rd Aug 2014 9:45pm
23rd Aug 2014 9:55pm
24th Aug 2014 5:12am
A colorful dressing gown falling to the ground to reveal beautiful views -- your choice of words shows you to be an erotic magician who creates lustrous magic with words..... Count me as a fan of your poetry.....♡♡♡ :)
24th Aug 2014 5:21am
Well thankyou very much Scarletvelvet for your lovely commenting
glad you were able to take something from it
glad you were able to take something from it
24th Aug 2014 1:40pm
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