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This is Real
Real is the love you saw in my eyes
It is the sorrow I feel now
As you say we’re through
You say you don’t know love
But you’ve seen it
As I held you in my arms
You say your heart is silent
Yet I can hear it scream
You say you feel nothing
But I’ve seen your tears
You said you were heartless
so I have given you mine
You beg for forgiveness
But you have nothing to be forgiven
I should be asking your forgiveness
for the pain that I have caused
If I were to breathe my last breath this day
With my final words I will say
I love you... always
It is the sorrow I feel now
As you say we’re through
You say you don’t know love
But you’ve seen it
As I held you in my arms
You say your heart is silent
Yet I can hear it scream
You say you feel nothing
But I’ve seen your tears
You said you were heartless
so I have given you mine
You beg for forgiveness
But you have nothing to be forgiven
I should be asking your forgiveness
for the pain that I have caused
If I were to breathe my last breath this day
With my final words I will say
I love you... always
Published 10th Apr 2011
| Edited 11th Apr 2011
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11th Apr 2011 00:53am
it's amazing and heartfelt i am sure the person you wrote this for feels the same
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30th Apr 2011 10:13am
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nothing would matter in life if there was never love...nice poem. liked it very much.
8th Oct 2014 6:10am
Shame twas all for nothing. I just didn't want to except it until it was shoved in my face.
8th Oct 2014 6:14am
9th Oct 2014 2:52pm
Yes. I was trying to tell someone how much I was sorry and that I loved her but I now know that she does not.
12th Oct 2014 11:24pm
Love isnt real until its given away, darling dear. At least you loved but once...
18th Oct 2014 7:08am
Twice really and if things were different I would have a wife and kids right now and never known heartbreak
29th Oct 2014 00:42am
4th Nov 2014 7:34pm
It's a crying shame i lost the subject of my writing but there will be others, I just have to look in the right place. Would it be alright for me to message you on your profile here, I could use a pen pal to bounce ideas off of and you could be the first to read anything new I come out with.
