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~ PTSD ~
It’s hard to see,
there is a stain
beneath the glass;
it glows as cake,
such as radium, ether,
or as with anything,
the only thing
that's real is the stain.
the stain is radioactive,
in that there are triggers;
it's religion, arrogance,
and fools for(religion & arrogance)
Thank you all for
your understanding.
there is a stain
beneath the glass;
it glows as cake,
such as radium, ether,
or as with anything,
the only thing
that's real is the stain.
the stain is radioactive,
in that there are triggers;
it's religion, arrogance,
and fools for(religion & arrogance)
Thank you all for
your understanding.
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Re: ~ PTSD ~
19th Aug 2014 7:07am
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19th Aug 2014 9:14pm
Re: ~ PTSD ~
19th Aug 2014 10:24am
I find the trouble is, that
once you've seen the stain,
as hard as that is, it's harder
still to take your eyes off it...
or maybe that's just me...
an ominously beautiful
poem...
once you've seen the stain,
as hard as that is, it's harder
still to take your eyes off it...
or maybe that's just me...
an ominously beautiful
poem...
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re: Re: ~ PTSD ~
19th Aug 2014 9:13pm
It was there and formed with near every thought that I've had. I forget it in moments of laughter and care not when my spirit is high, or when I'm learning something, in that I don't mind. It's just such torment sometimes. I'm writing more about it to get it out of my system so I can get back to whatever it is that I need to get back to... thank you..:)
Re: ~ PTSD ~
19th Aug 2014 2:36pm
"They" told me I gots 'it'.....
okay....
much more's the Arcane Entertainment of Human Living.....
---very well done--- y'r becoming most adept at compact, effective verselation----
so
glad
y'r
here
(or th'ere)
okay....
much more's the Arcane Entertainment of Human Living.....
---very well done--- y'r becoming most adept at compact, effective verselation----
so
glad
y'r
here
(or th'ere)
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re: Re: ~ PTSD ~
19th Aug 2014 9:15pm
Re: ~ PTSD ~
19th Aug 2014 6:02pm
I have a poem that I have never published on this same topic. I can relate to this on many levels.
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19th Aug 2014 9:01pm
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19th Aug 2014 9:17pm
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19th Aug 2014 11:19pm
Re: ~ PTSD ~
20th Aug 2014 2:25am
Ah, Pishashee, luv :-* ~
I comprehend from my vantage point, ne c'est pas, luv? There is healing in process, I think. There can be, at least. I feel you. Thank you for your trust. :-*
I comprehend from my vantage point, ne c'est pas, luv? There is healing in process, I think. There can be, at least. I feel you. Thank you for your trust. :-*
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20th Aug 2014 3:21am