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Today
Today I noticed
Something new about
This wonderful world
What is it?
That not everything
Is going to be
Precious forever
Today I discovered
That I am
Alone and dying
No one cares
About what's happening
To my diminishing, bleeding,
Stupid, heart.
Today I realized
That being outcasted
Isn't always bad
It teaches you
Things you wouldn't
Have noticed with others
Life's beauty..
Something new about
This wonderful world
What is it?
That not everything
Is going to be
Precious forever
Today I discovered
That I am
Alone and dying
No one cares
About what's happening
To my diminishing, bleeding,
Stupid, heart.
Today I realized
That being outcasted
Isn't always bad
It teaches you
Things you wouldn't
Have noticed with others
Life's beauty..
Published 18th Aug 2014
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Life is good, even if just for today. You have seen something that most, it seems, will not. Great write Jaimee-Leigh.
Anonymous
30th Oct 2014 3:55pm
This is wonderful.. When you're an outcast, it gives you a different kind of perception.. It's more open, and it sees the reality most people ignore, or hide from.. It teaches you the beauty of truth, and not just living day to day in a fairy tale world.. But to open your eyes, and free your mind to different possibilities.. The sad side to it, is it leaves you feeling lonely, and longing for something.. But in time hopefully you find that thing you're looking for.. For me it's living in the moment... Being true to who i am.. Sorry for the rant.. This is very good work, Jaimee-Leigh.. Enjoyed it, nice ink..
Dave
Dave
