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A walk with the spirits tonight:
A walk with the spirits tonight:
It’s time, to step back
It’s time, to watch life
Look and see: what direction is right
Writing, it is nice
It only fills the holes, for but a little while
It’s time for something deeper and beyond
Something visual for me
Time to connect with the wondering souls
I come to except
My sex
It is too fucking sexual
My pussy
She is delicious and beautiful
However I am in need of
Something more astronomical
My mind and my body
Is getting hard to control
I called you a dream- because I just didn’t want to deal with you
Baby
I need to fuck heaven and hell out of you- and make you cry for me: the way I know you long to
You will do what they all do, tell me you need me, tell me you love me
I will kiss your pain away
Then visit with the entities
Those that seem to understand me
I think I need to visit the ghost, to heal my soul
I need to take a break
I need to step back, and reevaluate
How we kiss and the give and take
Are you giving?
Am I taking?
I need to think about us
Is there a limit, I did not want one, I need to remove it
This needs to be regenerated
I need to see, what road I want to build next
I need the ghost to communicate kindred souls wait for my presence
I think, I want to just take a walk tonight: on the misty beach after the rain
Lori
It’s time, to step back
It’s time, to watch life
Look and see: what direction is right
Writing, it is nice
It only fills the holes, for but a little while
It’s time for something deeper and beyond
Something visual for me
Time to connect with the wondering souls
I come to except
My sex
It is too fucking sexual
My pussy
She is delicious and beautiful
However I am in need of
Something more astronomical
My mind and my body
Is getting hard to control
I called you a dream- because I just didn’t want to deal with you
Baby
I need to fuck heaven and hell out of you- and make you cry for me: the way I know you long to
You will do what they all do, tell me you need me, tell me you love me
I will kiss your pain away
Then visit with the entities
Those that seem to understand me
I think I need to visit the ghost, to heal my soul
I need to take a break
I need to step back, and reevaluate
How we kiss and the give and take
Are you giving?
Am I taking?
I need to think about us
Is there a limit, I did not want one, I need to remove it
This needs to be regenerated
I need to see, what road I want to build next
I need the ghost to communicate kindred souls wait for my presence
I think, I want to just take a walk tonight: on the misty beach after the rain
Lori
Published 17th Aug 2014
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17th Aug 2014 2:55am
This is one of the most insiteful, well written pieces I've read from you to date. Fueled and driven by a lot of feeling, steeped in emotion and introspective thinking. Pointed reflections from your mirror........truths that need to be seen.
This for many should be a must read. Here's to finding your way too your innerself :-)
This for many should be a must read. Here's to finding your way too your innerself :-)
17th Aug 2014 4:11am
17th Aug 2014 2:56am
17th Aug 2014 4:11am
17th Aug 2014 4:50am
Ahhh, seascape, luv :-* ~
A moment of reflection and rejuvenation for your soul, a more holistic perspective...
You are such an incredible elemental being, luv. I am glad you are taking time to renew yourself thoroughly; you are so precious. :-*
A moment of reflection and rejuvenation for your soul, a more holistic perspective...
You are such an incredible elemental being, luv. I am glad you are taking time to renew yourself thoroughly; you are so precious. :-*
17th Aug 2014 4:55am
Thank you my beautiful friend! I will be gone for a while but, I truly need the time♥ just finishing a few things here tonight ♥
17th Aug 2014 7:24am
There are things we don't understand. We just have to be.
Great piece. Growing girl.
Luvya stay saneO:-)
Great piece. Growing girl.
Luvya stay saneO:-)
18th Aug 2014 8:37pm
17th Aug 2014 7:35am
"I think I need to visit the ghost, to heal my soul
I need to take a break
I need to step back, and reevaluate"
i echo Mister M, i love this deeply reflective piece from you Miss Lori.
I need to take a break
I need to step back, and reevaluate"
i echo Mister M, i love this deeply reflective piece from you Miss Lori.
18th Aug 2014 8:38pm
It helps to take a break and see the big picture I am not done looking but these two were haunting me♥
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