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Did I Miss She Asked
Last Night
I didn't want to stop
Tasting your sweet lips
And falling deep
Into your eyes
Like an eclipse
Lips tingling
Of passion setting in
Then I just left
You thought you missed
That did not happen
I felt it every where
Throughout my body
Swelling in my heart
And into my soul
Controlling flawlessly
I wanted that moment to be pure
To hold within my heart
A message of truth
A kiss of death to doubt
Give it no place to start
As I touch my lips today
I am brought to that moment
Overwhelming feeling emerge
The touch of an angel
And her loving kiss
Trembling words utter
As I say this
I Love you
You Never missed
I didn't want to stop
Tasting your sweet lips
And falling deep
Into your eyes
Like an eclipse
Lips tingling
Of passion setting in
Then I just left
You thought you missed
That did not happen
I felt it every where
Throughout my body
Swelling in my heart
And into my soul
Controlling flawlessly
I wanted that moment to be pure
To hold within my heart
A message of truth
A kiss of death to doubt
Give it no place to start
As I touch my lips today
I am brought to that moment
Overwhelming feeling emerge
The touch of an angel
And her loving kiss
Trembling words utter
As I say this
I Love you
You Never missed
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Re: Did I Miss She Asked
14th Aug 2014 5:22pm
Dearest Awakened.. such a beautiful write.. poignant..touching..mesmerizing..awakening feelings of sweet romance and love found in a kiss... exceptional ink Sir... enjoyed this much.. with deepest respect..domore
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re: Re: Did I Miss She Asked
18th Aug 2014 1:55pm
Thank you, Sometimes forget the power of a Kiss. Truly a gift when two bodies talk through the lips.
Re: Did I Miss She Asked
14th Aug 2014 5:28pm
Sir....your ink dripping with the purest of beauty. An honor to have read this piece. Two words comes to mind....breath taking
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re: Re: Did I Miss She Asked
18th Aug 2014 1:57pm
You are to sweet darling. Your eyes are always welcome to dance across my pages.
Re: Did I Miss She Asked
14th Aug 2014 6:36pm
pure
simple
lovely
innocent
delicious
awakening
inviting and adorable
lovely honey kiss
says she
wants more of it
the lower ones can cum
all life long
but stolen kisses
to memories everlasting ones
belong
so kiss such more
off and on
simple
lovely
innocent
delicious
awakening
inviting and adorable
lovely honey kiss
says she
wants more of it
the lower ones can cum
all life long
but stolen kisses
to memories everlasting ones
belong
so kiss such more
off and on
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Re: Did I Miss She Asked
14th Aug 2014 10:03pm
You bro. Most certainly did not miss with this ink! So beautifully expressed, so flawlessly flowing
I gotta add it to my list! :)
I gotta add it to my list! :)
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re: Re: Did I Miss She Asked
15th Aug 2014 10:16pm
thank you so very much
the ink ensues
from guys like you
who love ere
they the inevitably
irresistably
evidentally
naturally
comfortably do
that what they quickly do
that alone is so thoughtful of you
any woman gal young old teen and etc
would for it alone LOVE you
and say love
hear we lay for you
you wait look and see
then do..
do
the ink ensues
from guys like you
who love ere
they the inevitably
irresistably
evidentally
naturally
comfortably do
that what they quickly do
that alone is so thoughtful of you
any woman gal young old teen and etc
would for it alone LOVE you
and say love
hear we lay for you
you wait look and see
then do..
do
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re: re: Re: Did I Miss She Asked
18th Aug 2014 1:58pm
You are a unique dude Again, you have a style like no other. I appreciate your words and reading
re: Re: Did I Miss She Asked
PoetikMind
I am most honored to have found a place within the halls of all the other greats of your personal collection.
Most gracious comment, feeling it dude
I am most honored to have found a place within the halls of all the other greats of your personal collection.
Most gracious comment, feeling it dude
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18th Aug 2014 5:16pm
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18th Aug 2014 2:04pm
thank you Wounded Heart, I am happy that you have read my work, your comment is greatly appreciated.
Re: Did I Miss She Asked
15th Aug 2014 2:27am
such a beautiful piece of ink Awakenedsoul....
you didn't miss on this one...
and she certainly did not miss... :)
you didn't miss on this one...
and she certainly did not miss... :)
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re: Re: Did I Miss She Asked
18th Aug 2014 2:09pm
Kate,
What a pleasure it always is to have you visit. Tremendous honor overwhelms me with the add to your golden bindings of treasured writes.
What a pleasure it always is to have you visit. Tremendous honor overwhelms me with the add to your golden bindings of treasured writes.
Re: Did I Miss She Asked
15th Aug 2014 7:30am
how exquisitely poignant, Sir
"I wanted that moment to be pure
To hold within my heart"
breathtakingly beautiful, as always.
"I wanted that moment to be pure
To hold within my heart"
breathtakingly beautiful, as always.
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re: Re: Did I Miss She Asked
18th Aug 2014 2:11pm
Thank you dear, I must travel from time to time to the softer edges of poetry. I just hope I do it justice.
Re: Did I Miss She Asked
15th Aug 2014 7:53am
...your ink just has that "IT" factor about it, G! So captivating and sensual, this....
...I'm glad my ass is back here reading you. ;)
...I'm glad my ass is back here reading you. ;)
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re: Re: Did I Miss She Asked
18th Aug 2014 2:13pm
Rain, You have been extremely missed girrrrllll.
Always a smile when your name crosses the threads of my soul
Always a smile when your name crosses the threads of my soul
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Anonymous
15th Aug 2014 10:31am
Great stuff, been in that magical place before.
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re: Re: Did I Miss She Asked
18th Aug 2014 2:14pm
It is quite a moment when the moment has you.
Thank you stopping in and reading and commenting.
Thank you stopping in and reading and commenting.
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16th Aug 2014 1:48pm
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18th Aug 2014 2:16pm
Tommy Lynn,
To have captured the softness of your grace gives me great pleasure...Thank you bringing elegance to my pages.
To have captured the softness of your grace gives me great pleasure...Thank you bringing elegance to my pages.
Re: Did I Miss She Asked
16th Aug 2014 3:16pm
Pureness as that of a reflection of poetry on a silky pond of pleasure. love it deeply :)
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re: Re: Did I Miss She Asked
18th Aug 2014 2:21pm
To have ones work measured from eyes that crumble me with deep blue power conjured from fingers made to hold....captivate me, make me bleed to offer whats inside.
all I can say is thank you
all I can say is thank you
Re: Did I Miss She Asked
17th Aug 2014 2:51am
You certainly slammed dunked it down with that last line and I felt the impact! always a fan..
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re: Re: Did I Miss She Asked
18th Aug 2014 2:23pm
Thank you Feenix
You have been a fan from the beginning, I can not say enough how that has given me strength, thank you
You have been a fan from the beginning, I can not say enough how that has given me strength, thank you
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24th Aug 2014 1:36am