Asymmetrical Life

interesting Poet....
honestly i read this and think....cryptic....
whether you meant it to be or not that's how i'm reading it and interpreting it....interesting it is.....

This is a reflective piece, that's all
It may sound cryptic but it's not that bad
Doing a little searching to see where I fit

Granite, luv :-* ~

I'd have to agree with GeniusGirl here: cryptic, with the addition of, to me at least, a slight feeling of melancholy or a bittersweet air...

There's a current of unrest slipping through the air here...

Yes, unrest is a good way to word it ...

I like this one. Many of your thoughts are blunt and to the point ( at least to me, they are ) . This is a good example...like like

I'm not flowery in my writing
I'll leave that to others
I state facts and feelings
Ironically I wrote a poem here entitled "Blunt"
A rather forceful graphic piece
It makes me laugh when I read it
Check it out and tell me what you think

Love your comments

It's interesting that Kate read this as cryptic ... I'm at that point in my life where this down right upbeat.  I know I'm past my expiration date (or it's soon coming)... so I might as well enjoy the last few sips and ticks on that wind up watch ... Cool write.

Thx Lo
Glad you got the message
I agree with you this is upbeat for me !

Like my profile says "I've been around for awhile, I've got some stories to tell and some scores to settle"