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not for long...
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not for long...
I'm going away
for a while
he thought she'd be
ok about it...
Written by
dartford
(Paul S...)
Published
6th Aug 2014
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Re: not for long...
Pishashee
6th Aug 2014 2:42am
A musing. Very creative, by the way.
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re: Re: not for long...
dartford
(Paul S...)
7th Aug 2014 1:03am
she certainly created a
fuss..:(
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Re: not for long...
LobodeSanPedro
6th Aug 2014 12:56pm
I Love! the way you've used the spacing to create tension and confusion in the piece.
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re: Re: not for long...
dartford
(Paul S...)
7th Aug 2014 1:06am
thanks, Lobo, the spaces
are the places
that let in
the light..:)
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Re: not for long...
jagracia
8th Aug 2014 1:08pm
thinking and knowing
are not always the same...
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re: Re: not for long...
dartford
(Paul S...)
8th Aug 2014 5:34pm
with me, I find they're not
even on speaking terms...
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Re: not for long...
patrickbirdener
(Patrick Birdener)
9th Aug 2014 4:52am
***.***.*
yes, there will be a twist...
***
yes, it's implied here.
oh,...
i love your writing as much as i love the truth of life--which i may hate, but have to love to like--um...but i really don't dislike your writing in the first place. it has a sharp truth to it tha is unparalleled.
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re: Re: not for long...
dartford
(Paul S...)
10th Aug 2014 11:41pm
thanks...I think the truth is
the subtext for much of
what we say,
but then who reads
the small print...
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