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No more fighting
Sometimes we don't want to fight
we just want to lay down and feel every fucking blow
bask in the pain
understand the reason for the agony
and love it
we just want to lay down and feel every fucking blow
bask in the pain
understand the reason for the agony
and love it
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Re: No more fighting
2nd Aug 2014 7:09am
I don't fight anymore but I won't lay and take that kinda shit from nobody.
Awesome lil piece Ms. Gg
Sir Lancelott
Awesome lil piece Ms. Gg
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: No more fighting
2nd Aug 2014 7:21am
Well it's more like a self conflict type thing. I must've not portrayed it correctly then. It was a fast right I'll tweak it up some Ty xox
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2nd Aug 2014 7:24am
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3rd Aug 2014 5:01am
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4th Aug 2014 5:01am
Re: No more fighting
3rd Aug 2014 2:45am
fuck all this fightfightfight
fuck all this competition
wee 'live' so much 'longer' now, yet keep pounding, repounding, compounding, all the shit that wee say:
"Life's too short for that crap" about....
& while we're at it -fuck all our stupid human clichés ----
&, like, oh yeah, welcome back ms.gg
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re: Re: No more fighting
3rd Aug 2014 5:00am
Re: No more fighting
4th Aug 2014 7:48am
I'm stalking you because you wanted to hang me up. I now hate you. If you hate yourself too or are somewhere in the fence, it's clear you'll have an easy time accepting my hate and the hate of everybody else. You'll think it's justified and you'll just keep doing whatever you can to keep stimulating that hate in others. Or well, you might simply lie down and passively enjoy the blows, the agony. I guess it saves you the trouble of doing it to yourself.
Well, well... Bye :)
Well, well... Bye :)
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re: Re: No more fighting
5th Aug 2014 2:30pm
Ok I'm lost lol what are you talking about? If this is a ploy to bate me into some kinda of online argument it's not going to happen . I seriously don't have the time for it. But thanks for stopping in and stalking lol
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5th Aug 2014 7:03pm
Oh god, no. Of course you don't remember, but you said I should be hung up for using "Midget" instead of "Dwarf" in my nickname when you answered a question of mine in the "Ask a Question" forum game. I just used that as an intro to my comment because I wanted to play around with the general idea of your text, of not wanting to continue fighting and even masochistically enjoying aggression from others. English is not my native language, so maybe I just wrote unintelligible crap instead of sounding all cool and smartass like I wanted. Anyway, you're welcome! Haha.
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Re: No more fighting
13th Aug 2014 11:38am
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28th Oct 2014 2:37am
Re: No more fighting
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- Edited 30th Oct 2014 9:57pm
30th Oct 2014 9:56pm
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