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Forever Love (My first poem)
Love doesnt last forever
Love just seems that way
Love is the butterflys in your stomach
That creep out and drift away
Love is your first birthday
Love is your first kiss
Love is the pain inside your chest
Or the knife against your wrist
Love is unlike anything
Love is what we crave
Love can lift our soul up
Or set our heart ablaze
Love is sent from heaven
Love pulls us down to hell
So is love really worth the pain
Only time will tell
Love just seems that way
Love is the butterflys in your stomach
That creep out and drift away
Love is your first birthday
Love is your first kiss
Love is the pain inside your chest
Or the knife against your wrist
Love is unlike anything
Love is what we crave
Love can lift our soul up
Or set our heart ablaze
Love is sent from heaven
Love pulls us down to hell
So is love really worth the pain
Only time will tell
Published 7th Apr 2011
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7th Apr 2011 4:34am
i expected you to be good, but if this is your very first i am incredibly excited to see what follows (:
7th Apr 2011 4:43am
7th Apr 2011 7:30am
7th Apr 2011 2:05pm
If this was your first poem I porbably wouldn't have been able to tell. IT doesn't seem like a beginner poem. Can't wait to read more :)
7th Apr 2011 6:11pm
so amazing! you conveyed the hundreds of feelings that love can create within just a few words. great job!
7th Apr 2011 9:45pm
7th Apr 2011 10:29pm
Thanks everyone for commenting on your feelings about my poem. Im glad you liked it. Still more to come!
9th Apr 2011 1:26am
