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The River
Before you my naked heart
Unbind the chains from yours
Press your lips upon my glossy shine
Feel me tingle through you
Linger along my stream
Stay awhile
Allow yourself to get wet
Fuse into me, slowly, dare you
Sink into me, slowly, dare you
I'll take your breath away
Unbind the chains from yours
Press your lips upon my glossy shine
Feel me tingle through you
Linger along my stream
Stay awhile
Allow yourself to get wet
Fuse into me, slowly, dare you
Sink into me, slowly, dare you
I'll take your breath away
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Re: The River
31st Jul 2014 12:45pm
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31st Jul 2014 1:05pm
Re: The River
Anonymous
31st Jul 2014 2:02pm
Loved this repetition:
"Fuse into me, slowly, dare you
Sink into me, slowly, dare you"
"Fuse into me, slowly, dare you
Sink into me, slowly, dare you"
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31st Jul 2014 2:24pm
Re: The River
Anonymous
31st Jul 2014 2:07pm
Tommie Lynn,
A river worth the dare! But I think no lingering involved; a head first dive! Enjoyed!
tornado
A river worth the dare! But I think no lingering involved; a head first dive! Enjoyed!
tornado
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31st Jul 2014 2:25pm
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31st Jul 2014 8:29pm
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1st Aug 2014 1:30am
Re: The River
1st Aug 2014 5:29am
Come on in the water's fine :)
If I but dip my toe
in your mesmerizing waters
I will be swept away
by the inescapably
strong current
of your all-consuming passion
only to be found downstream
limp, sapped of strength
smiling serenely
Do I need my swimming trunks? :)
Wonderful poem, Tommie!
If I but dip my toe
in your mesmerizing waters
I will be swept away
by the inescapably
strong current
of your all-consuming passion
only to be found downstream
limp, sapped of strength
smiling serenely
Do I need my swimming trunks? :)
Wonderful poem, Tommie!
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