Serenade, Marinade

I found a really dark undertone in this piece that unsettles me. You've left me quite disturbed in so few words. Well done. A very thought provoking, memory inducing write you've got here.

Spot on, Indie. It was meant to unsettle, and I'm pleased you picked up on the subtle hints of menace.

Thank you.

^^ I agree, well done :)

Thank you, too kind.

So many lines for serenade and only one line for marinade?
This was soft, sweet and sad. Like rocking an ill child to sleep.

*evil grin*

A cruel write, read it again...

Cheers, Dys.

Such a bitter disappointment....? Your evil! But I'm sticking by my original interpretation lol I wanna be a glass half full kinda guy for a little longer at least.

Thanks, Gabe!

:)