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Lovely
And not even a thousand words can describe my lovely thoughts--
of you and the whole universe.
To put my fascination into text
would conform the words into such dull fantasy
that my mind wouldn't reflect it in what way it should.
of you and the whole universe.
To put my fascination into text
would conform the words into such dull fantasy
that my mind wouldn't reflect it in what way it should.
Published 26th Jul 2014
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26th Jul 2014 11:17pm
it's true, some thoughts & feelings can't be adequately translated into words. as writers, we attempt to get as close as possible. good writing tends to get the point across.
& remember this axiom: write what you know...
& remember this axiom: write what you know...
27th Jul 2014 00:00am
This poem is very easy to relate to.. Truth and reality are nearly impossible to put into words. I think they speak a different language.. However, I agree with John - as writers we try to translate as best we can what may be untranslatable..
I wonder, if 1000 words cannot describe your lovely thoughts, can they describe your darkest thoughts?
I wonder, if 1000 words cannot describe your lovely thoughts, can they describe your darkest thoughts?
27th Jul 2014 4:47am
Welcome to DU fire.....
I like your ink....
Can so relate to what you say..... :)
I like your ink....
Can so relate to what you say..... :)
27th Jul 2014 6:19pm
Very nice poem.
But, if you can sense (see, feel, touch, taste, hear, smell) it, and it reverberates with your heart and soul, then you can write something... But, something, may not be right. It's strange, but it does seem that when you put truth into words, the truth moves...
But, if you can sense (see, feel, touch, taste, hear, smell) it, and it reverberates with your heart and soul, then you can write something... But, something, may not be right. It's strange, but it does seem that when you put truth into words, the truth moves...
