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"Initiation"
once upon an exploration
gal meets guy, wonderful sensation
she writes about Him, in concise notation
a sensual conspiracy, He seeks, speaks an invitation
she eagerly accepts, knowing His motivation
with no experience, this her initiation
her dreams, now reality, submissive gratification
knowing He is genuine, no fantasy nor imitation
soon she is consumed in wet, physical variation
hear her moans of illicit confirmation
sighs and shouts, sounds of wild celebration
satisfies throughout, with complete saturation
she glows with joy, loving His manipulation
*July 22, 2014*
Published 26th Jul 2014
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This took me back to why I even write poetry today! Thanks for stroll down memory lane. And a fabulous write. Loved it. :)
26th Jul 2014 4:12am
Many thanks, m-lady, for sharing your encouraging
reaction and the RL selection.
Appreciate the love. :)
reaction and the RL selection.
Appreciate the love. :)
26th Jul 2014 4:29am
Sweet EV!!! Wowzers! Ths is full of...um....exploring adventure. Great seductive lines in this. Enjoyed! Xo :)
26th Jul 2014 4:51am
Dang, Sweetness!
Methinks this is the first, "Wowzers"
ever bestowed upon me. I'm honored. :)
Always appreciate you.
xo
Methinks this is the first, "Wowzers"
ever bestowed upon me. I'm honored. :)
Always appreciate you.
xo
26th Jul 2014 6:30am
OMG....this piece of ink is amazing...
Your words have unlocked something within me....am crying...not quite sure why...
Thanks VP....I think....
Your words have unlocked something within me....am crying...not quite sure why...
Thanks VP....I think....
26th Jul 2014 8:06am
Well, kate, I am most humbled by your intense
emotional reaction.
Here's hoping you determine the, "why"
stems from something pleasurable. :)
Thank you for sharing such gracious words.
emotional reaction.
Here's hoping you determine the, "why"
stems from something pleasurable. :)
Thank you for sharing such gracious words.
26th Jul 2014 12:08pm
"her dreams, now reality, submissive gratification
knowing He is genuine, no fantasy nor imitation"
so rare to find this these days. much enjoyed, Sir x
knowing He is genuine, no fantasy nor imitation"
so rare to find this these days. much enjoyed, Sir x
30th Jul 2014 4:56am
I trust your opinion, kitten, regarding rarity.
It is an unfortunate comment on society.
Thankful for your taking the time to read and share
your kind remarks. Pleased to know you enjoyed.
It is an unfortunate comment on society.
Thankful for your taking the time to read and share
your kind remarks. Pleased to know you enjoyed.
Mr. VP,
I enjoyed the same exact lines as Winter mentioned.
When you are with someone who is genuine, there is so much to explore and enjoy.
Beautiful as usual sir!
I enjoyed the same exact lines as Winter mentioned.
When you are with someone who is genuine, there is so much to explore and enjoy.
Beautiful as usual sir!
30th Jul 2014 4:59am
30th Jul 2014 5:41pm
Darling Mr. VP... yes!!yes!!.yeeeeeaaaass!! "she glows with joy, loving His manipulation" mental note to self.. to get a glass of water before reading your erotica.. with love and respect YLL... xoxo domore
31st Jul 2014 7:00am
SweeTT Lady, it is most pleasing to know your
enjoyment was so heated. :) Yessss! :)~
Honored to be a selection for your RL.
Dispensing recently stored "rain" upon you
for your glowing review. :D
Thanxx,
YLH
enjoyment was so heated. :) Yessss! :)~
Honored to be a selection for your RL.
Dispensing recently stored "rain" upon you
for your glowing review. :D
Thanxx,
YLH
