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Intimacy Defined
When all the crash boom fireworks
Have played their course
What remains are the intimate moments
That define a relationship
A certain look across the room
Finishing thoughts before they are spoken
Doing things for each other that you'd rather not
But doing them anyway, because it's for you
Sharing the load of mundane chores
Snuggling close in bed making things hot
Putting on the AC to cool the heat
Intimacy, love, thrilling times to repeat
Have played their course
What remains are the intimate moments
That define a relationship
A certain look across the room
Finishing thoughts before they are spoken
Doing things for each other that you'd rather not
But doing them anyway, because it's for you
Sharing the load of mundane chores
Snuggling close in bed making things hot
Putting on the AC to cool the heat
Intimacy, love, thrilling times to repeat
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Re: Intimacy Defined
21st Jul 2014 2:59pm
At this ripe young age, I've seen a lot of relationship challenges. Somehow I usually end up being the voice of reason ....
Thx Jack
Thx Jack
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21st Jul 2014 8:53pm
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21st Jul 2014 8:55pm
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A lovely write indeed. Made me smile and get all giddy inside. Fireworks...good ones, mind you...only last about 20 to 30 minutes Its what we do the rest of the 23 hours and 30 minutes that really counts....:) Always love reading what you put out there, PS.
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Re. Intimacy Defined
7th May 2021 7:38pm
Loved the first two stanzas. I think they can stand on their own pretty strong.
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Re. Intimacy Defined
7th May 2021 7:40pm
Feels like I've been here forever
I like that you went back to my beginning
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I like that you went back to my beginning
Thank you 13