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Hello
You had me at hello, five simple letters splayed out,
meaningless on their lonesome self voyage,
but discovered together you gave creative reasoning,
took to patient understanding,
had me you did, at hello, you know this.
Always to be yours with that knowing smile,
to pay more to become sold on you,
I would without question,
without question.. raising my hand up higher than anyone else,
but I'll walk freely to you with loving kisses and warm embraces,
waiting to share openly with you, my love, you got me still.
meaningless on their lonesome self voyage,
but discovered together you gave creative reasoning,
took to patient understanding,
had me you did, at hello, you know this.
Always to be yours with that knowing smile,
to pay more to become sold on you,
I would without question,
without question.. raising my hand up higher than anyone else,
but I'll walk freely to you with loving kisses and warm embraces,
waiting to share openly with you, my love, you got me still.
Published 21st Jul 2014
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21st Jul 2014 2:45pm
21st Jul 2014 3:08pm
21st Jul 2014 6:55pm
Rose, you've written a truly romantic declaration of love. Beautifully done...bravisima!
21st Jul 2014 7:49pm
22nd Jul 2014 2:48pm
22nd Jul 2014 7:27pm
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2014 3:56pm
Rose, so much truth in something so simple. It's pure love, asking for nothing in return but a smile.
22nd Jul 2014 7:27pm
