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Freedom!
Upon the field
With sword and shield
Darkened skies
As lightning strikes
Form the ranks
It’s time for war
Soldiers march
Freedom’s cost
Standing firm
Or all is lost
The principals
Of poor man’s call
He gathers arms
To spread alarm
In the hearts
Of tyranny
Across miles
For a stand
Raise their fists
Across the lands
To stand in the face of tyranny
At the end of centuries
Standing in defiance of their kingdom
With the price of blood we chant,
“Freedom!”
The rivers red
Of all the dead
All for the need
Of tyrant’s greed
Now he lays
In his own blood
Word has spread
To this day
Of blue skies
Out of the gray
We stood in the face of tyranny
At the end of centuries
Standing in defiance of their kingdom
With the price of blood we chant,
“Freedom!”
entered in the Independence Comp
With sword and shield
Darkened skies
As lightning strikes
Form the ranks
It’s time for war
Soldiers march
Freedom’s cost
Standing firm
Or all is lost
The principals
Of poor man’s call
He gathers arms
To spread alarm
In the hearts
Of tyranny
Across miles
For a stand
Raise their fists
Across the lands
To stand in the face of tyranny
At the end of centuries
Standing in defiance of their kingdom
With the price of blood we chant,
“Freedom!”
The rivers red
Of all the dead
All for the need
Of tyrant’s greed
Now he lays
In his own blood
Word has spread
To this day
Of blue skies
Out of the gray
We stood in the face of tyranny
At the end of centuries
Standing in defiance of their kingdom
With the price of blood we chant,
“Freedom!”
entered in the Independence Comp
Published 14th Jul 2014
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14th Jul 2014 5:00am
14th Jul 2014 5:06am
14th Jul 2014 5:31am
Classic ... Classic ... Classic flick - and your piece is a great ode to it, and those who've had to fight true oppression.
14th Jul 2014 6:22am
like I said to Grace, this is one of my favorites so when I spotted the Independence comp I knew what I wanted to write
15th Jul 2014 3:53am
Damn I love this! Powerful imagery! Grand Ink!
I smell a winner in this comp, Hades! :)
Pen On~
I smell a winner in this comp, Hades! :)
Pen On~
15th Jul 2014 3:58am
15th Jul 2014 5:16am
OMG the details!! Love the imagery and adjectives you used.
Awesome piece Hades!! Always soo darkly refreshing to come back here to read ur pieces.
Darker
Awesome piece Hades!! Always soo darkly refreshing to come back here to read ur pieces.
Darker
15th Jul 2014 6:16am
16th Jul 2014 11:25pm
That's a worthy battle indeed Hades-Energy filled Ink Sir (perfect pic indeed)
17th Jul 2014 00:05am
