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Looking at your Lips

They would look good
on mine
Simple and delicate
acts of love

PoetSpeak

Written by PoetSpeak

Published 13th Jul 2014

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Re: Looking at your Lips

Anonymous

13th Jul 2014 2:41am

Acts of love
are Simple
and Delicate

like this poem. Beautiful, PoetSpeak;)

Re: Looking at your Lips

13th Jul 2014 2:52am

Thanks Dev
One of those little poems that suddenly appears out if nowhere
x

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Anonymous

13th Jul 2014 3:01am

I hear you;)

Re: Looking at your Lips

lilsouthernbelle

13th Jul 2014 5:10am

Simplistic beauty at its best

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13th Jul 2014 10:29am

Lips and eyes tell a lot about a person ...
:)

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Re: Looking at your Lips

rain1courtel (RainC)

13th Jul 2014 5:44am

Kinda' read a wee bit like a catchy pick-up line, but with sensual depth....Nice!

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13th Jul 2014 10:30am

Yes, you're right ...
:)

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Re: Looking at your Lips

tommielynn (Tommie Lynn)

13th Jul 2014 1:10pm

Beautiful!

You're right, lips and eyes. :)

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Re: Looking at your Lips

13th Jul 2014 3:00pm

Mmmmmmm
:)

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Re: Looking at your Lips

ScarlettA (Scarlett_A)

13th Jul 2014 4:49pm

Love! xo

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13th Jul 2014 7:46pm

I LOVE YOUR LIPS SCARLETT
xx

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Re: Looking at your Lips

seekingkate (kateA)

13th Jul 2014 7:29pm

Couldn't have said it better....
x

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Re: Looking at your Lips

13th Jul 2014 7:50pm

:)
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Re: Looking at your Lips

LillyoftheValley

16th Jul 2014 9:35am

Finish that.

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Re: Looking at your Lips

16th Jul 2014 9:47am

Where should it go ?

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