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Respect
Can I bask in your presence?
rest in your shade
say nothing at all and still draw your attention
without being a self absorbed whore
you already know how much I love being a cunt
well I'm feeling vulnerable as of late
I love it when you enter, hate it when you leave
no I'm not in love
though you have a way with words
that make me tingle all over
a way about you that makes me think of you
when I'm lying awake in bed at nights
a poet among poets I have great respect for you
rest in your shade
say nothing at all and still draw your attention
without being a self absorbed whore
you already know how much I love being a cunt
well I'm feeling vulnerable as of late
I love it when you enter, hate it when you leave
no I'm not in love
though you have a way with words
that make me tingle all over
a way about you that makes me think of you
when I'm lying awake in bed at nights
a poet among poets I have great respect for you
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Re: Respect
7th Jul 2014 5:46pm
Totallllly can feel this one dear Brenda.. so glad to see you back!! your voice has been missed dear friend! sending hugs.. with love and respect.. xoxo domore
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7th Jul 2014 6:00pm
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7th Jul 2014 6:25pm
A steamy connection Crim. I do so love how you spit ink
in such a raw, sensual way...I can feel it! So damn good. Enjoyed :)
in such a raw, sensual way...I can feel it! So damn good. Enjoyed :)
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7th Jul 2014 7:21pm
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7th Jul 2014 11:46pm
I feel the respect you have for this poet. We all should be this lucky. I hope he notices the admiration. Good write.
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8th Jul 2014 9:42am
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8th Jul 2014 1:23am
with all due respect dear crimsin...can i rest in your shade (always a pleasure to read your words)
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8th Jul 2014 9:45am
Hashman you are welcome to rest with me always thank you kindly for such an endearing comment :) with love Crim
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8th Jul 2014 2:26am
Respect and Love-it is shelter from the storm eh?
Touching Ink Dear Crim-just Float along the seas when currents drag You down!!!
Touching Ink Dear Crim-just Float along the seas when currents drag You down!!!
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8th Jul 2014 9:48am
thank you Soul good advise the ocean has always given my heart leave :) with love Crim
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8th Jul 2014 9:42am
Ahh, lovely Lass, masterfully written as always. You've been missed.
You shall always draw my attention, though certain I am this poet you reference is more worthy of your utmost respect.
XO,
Chad
You shall always draw my attention, though certain I am this poet you reference is more worthy of your utmost respect.
XO,
Chad
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8th Jul 2014 9:51am
Dearest Chad thank you for the love you've shown me.. this applies to you and many of the poets and poetesses I've come to love.. with love Brenda :)
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10th Jul 2014 3:40pm
Awesome tribute too a fine poet BRENDA!!
Great write!!
Sweet read!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write!!
Sweet read!!
Sir Lancelott
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11th Jul 2014 8:39pm
the epitome of a true slam dunk and way with words..loved this..respect..
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