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My Book of Life
splash of ink turned into mere words
my paper is bruised with pain and love
tears fall into the wrinkles leaving stains
another cigarette burns near the open window
smell our passion dancing around the room
your music intruding into my soul with rapture
your existence brings me turmoil and pleasure
wanting you to leave but begging you to stay
you are chapters in my book of life
my paper is bruised with pain and love
tears fall into the wrinkles leaving stains
another cigarette burns near the open window
smell our passion dancing around the room
your music intruding into my soul with rapture
your existence brings me turmoil and pleasure
wanting you to leave but begging you to stay
you are chapters in my book of life
Published 4th Jul 2014
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4th Jul 2014 2:14pm
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4th Jul 2014 3:29pm
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5th Jul 2014 3:31pm
4th Jul 2014 10:01pm
all of life's joys & sorrows fall into chapter & verse. stunning poetry, Tommie...
5th Jul 2014 3:32pm
5th Jul 2014 6:06am
Tommie, I love this passage:
"your existence brings me turmoil and pleasure
wanting you to leave but begging you to stay "
Beautiful my dear :)
"your existence brings me turmoil and pleasure
wanting you to leave but begging you to stay "
Beautiful my dear :)
5th Jul 2014 3:33pm
6th Jul 2014 7:53pm
You captured the ebb and flow of life between pleasure and pain very well. Some chapters are longer than others and it's understandable when someone makes a deep impact on you. Enjoyed.
6th Jul 2014 8:01pm
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