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Speaking
To me Karma is an interesting....enigma
To me the escape of her is like
attempting
to seek shelter
under a branchless tree...
For me Karma is much more
interesting to watch...
Interesting to see how her
deceitful tease
leads one to believe
their own
fables, tales and stories...
Helps them grow in their boldness
and emblazoned sense of self...
Goals and accomplishments
of yet another eye with
pulled wool--
See Karma, she has been known to be a bitch-
She has a way about her...
skilfully plays both teams
alliances built on treason
fortified with promises
meant to be broken
So as the world turns
so do the lies told in the
dark as well as the light...
They turn ammunition or sorts for Karma...
Used to threaten peace
so falsely enjoyed...
Because while you sleep,
dreaming dreams of
sugar cubes and fairies
and other delectable treats
Karma has enlisted her sister,
Justice...
and her beady eyes are
looking
for just the right spot...
To create your resting place...
Karmically speaking.
To me the escape of her is like
attempting
to seek shelter
under a branchless tree...
For me Karma is much more
interesting to watch...
Interesting to see how her
deceitful tease
leads one to believe
their own
fables, tales and stories...
Helps them grow in their boldness
and emblazoned sense of self...
Goals and accomplishments
of yet another eye with
pulled wool--
See Karma, she has been known to be a bitch-
She has a way about her...
skilfully plays both teams
alliances built on treason
fortified with promises
meant to be broken
So as the world turns
so do the lies told in the
dark as well as the light...
They turn ammunition or sorts for Karma...
Used to threaten peace
so falsely enjoyed...
Because while you sleep,
dreaming dreams of
sugar cubes and fairies
and other delectable treats
Karma has enlisted her sister,
Justice...
and her beady eyes are
looking
for just the right spot...
To create your resting place...
Karmically speaking.
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Re: Speaking
3rd Jul 2014 3:49pm
karma is really a bitch we have to space for it in our life .nicely expressed niknshell .
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re: Re: Speaking
3rd Jul 2014 4:05pm
Thanks Mojado--True-then again she will make space even when there is none! lol
Re: Speaking
3rd Jul 2014 4:31pm
Wow girl! I never really saw it that way, but with your detail.....you are so right.
I've seen it happen
I've seen it happen
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re: Re: Speaking
3rd Jul 2014 6:37pm
Re: Speaking
4th Jul 2014 6:58am
"interesting....enigma" indeed!!! really like how you broke this down, Wonderful Ink..I enjoyed
fav part:
Interesting to see how her
deceitful tease
leads one to believe
their own
fables, tales and stories...
Helps them grow in their boldness
and emblazoned sense of self...
Goals and accomplishments
of yet another eye with
pulled wool--
See Karma, she has been known to be a bitch-
She has a way about her...
yes yes this was so on point!!!
fav part:
Interesting to see how her
deceitful tease
leads one to believe
their own
fables, tales and stories...
Helps them grow in their boldness
and emblazoned sense of self...
Goals and accomplishments
of yet another eye with
pulled wool--
See Karma, she has been known to be a bitch-
She has a way about her...
yes yes this was so on point!!!
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re: Re: Speaking
5th Jul 2014 2:55am
Poetic I appreciate the ink love!! This was a great way for me to release and vent...
Re: Speaking
4th Jul 2014 12:41pm
Karma used to be that Bitch
til Justice overpowered her lol
Seriously, so much to like here
N so much truth too! :)
til Justice overpowered her lol
Seriously, so much to like here
N so much truth too! :)
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re: Re: Speaking
5th Jul 2014 2:56am
Re: Speaking
4th Jul 2014 6:06pm
I adore your kind of KARMA Ms. Shell!!
Awesomely great write sweets!!
That pen works well with you!!
Love the read!!
Sir Lancelott
Awesomely great write sweets!!
That pen works well with you!!
Love the read!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Speaking
5th Jul 2014 2:56am
Re: Speaking
5th Jul 2014 00:33am
I absolutely love where this ink took me!
The imagery, the message, the cause to ponder; amazing read!
Enjoyed Shell! Xo
The imagery, the message, the cause to ponder; amazing read!
Enjoyed Shell! Xo
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re: Re: Speaking
5th Jul 2014 2:57am
re: Re: Speaking
9th Jul 2014 1:04pm
Thanks--glad you enjoyed and took the time to stop by and read! Much appreciated!
Re: Speaking
11th Sep 2014 5:36am
re: Re: Speaking
11th Sep 2014 8:19pm
This is very true! Appreciate you taking the time read and comment on my works!! Thanks!
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22nd Oct 2014 12:38pm
Re. Speaking
25th Jan 2016 3:17am
While I have been a believer in karma for a long time, I never considered it had a predatory dimension, or the requisite bait-and-capture strategy that follows...
Interesting to see how her
deceitful tease
leads one to believe
their own
fables, tales and stories...
Karma does enable, or motivate towards self enabling?
See Karma, she has been known to be a bitch-
She has a way about her...
skilfully plays both teams
alliances built on treason
fortified with promises
meant to be broken
She keeps the wheel moving...
For her sister.
Interesting to see how her
deceitful tease
leads one to believe
their own
fables, tales and stories...
Karma does enable, or motivate towards self enabling?
See Karma, she has been known to be a bitch-
She has a way about her...
skilfully plays both teams
alliances built on treason
fortified with promises
meant to be broken
She keeps the wheel moving...
For her sister.
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Re: Re. Speaking
26th Jan 2016 1:22pm
Interesting take with the predatory sense--I appreciate that. Can't say I understand it--just my perceptions from outside...but those sisters I tell ya!!!!!! :)