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Intense:
Intense:
Maybe I need it, and all its Intensity, I am so good at understanding others
I am fucked when it comes to me
I seem to know what I am good at, why don’t I do that same thing for myself
I have a snappy mouth I can be a bitch, I try to bite my lips, but the words keep coming
I think I might need this it looks like it’s a sweet release
True it’s a step beyond my comfort zone but maybe I should step out of what I think I know
I see you hanging there and you look like you have reached nirvana
I want to go too, can you take me with you, know this is a one person trip, I see it in you
The rings pulling on your skin while you’re hooked to the chains
It is amazing that you don’t rip, but I would clean it up for you if you did, would you do the same for me
Pain that goes away, and then nothing, absolutely nothing, to make you weak
I see the Intensity, I see it’s intense, I think I want to feel this, I think I want to, as I am watching this
I know what you have been through we were there together as children and now I see what you do and
Maybe I need it, and all its Intensity, I am so good at understanding others
I am fucked when it comes to me
I don’t understand all those normal ones; they just have never been able to help me
I have this conflict of what I should be, I walk away from what society says is mainstream, but they are
All lost and lonely, here you’re educated and making the world change, here you hurt like me, here you
Want to save all the others that are innocent from the same damn thing, and your skin is slowly dripping
Blood the past is being washed away this is doing what hot showers never did
As your pulled higher and I see you rise on the chains I see that look on your face your there in that
Place of delight and peace, this is intense, and I think I need to feel what you’re feeling
Seascape
Maybe I need it, and all its Intensity, I am so good at understanding others
I am fucked when it comes to me
I seem to know what I am good at, why don’t I do that same thing for myself
I have a snappy mouth I can be a bitch, I try to bite my lips, but the words keep coming
I think I might need this it looks like it’s a sweet release
True it’s a step beyond my comfort zone but maybe I should step out of what I think I know
I see you hanging there and you look like you have reached nirvana
I want to go too, can you take me with you, know this is a one person trip, I see it in you
The rings pulling on your skin while you’re hooked to the chains
It is amazing that you don’t rip, but I would clean it up for you if you did, would you do the same for me
Pain that goes away, and then nothing, absolutely nothing, to make you weak
I see the Intensity, I see it’s intense, I think I want to feel this, I think I want to, as I am watching this
I know what you have been through we were there together as children and now I see what you do and
Maybe I need it, and all its Intensity, I am so good at understanding others
I am fucked when it comes to me
I don’t understand all those normal ones; they just have never been able to help me
I have this conflict of what I should be, I walk away from what society says is mainstream, but they are
All lost and lonely, here you’re educated and making the world change, here you hurt like me, here you
Want to save all the others that are innocent from the same damn thing, and your skin is slowly dripping
Blood the past is being washed away this is doing what hot showers never did
As your pulled higher and I see you rise on the chains I see that look on your face your there in that
Place of delight and peace, this is intense, and I think I need to feel what you’re feeling
Seascape
Published 28th Jun 2014
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Anonymous
28th Jun 2014 11:49pm
This poem feels intense, the way you are conveying yourself. It's a 2 or 3 reads one for me, to take it all in, but that's not a bad thing.
28th Jun 2014 11:55pm
29th Jun 2014 2:34am
29th Jun 2014 12:39pm
29th Jun 2014 1:13pm
Intensely written and intensely felt.Yeah,maybe you need to take a step beyond your comfort zone,i can feel the intense temptation to donate your soul to the taste of that foreign euphoria,but, once the steam cools off and you are back to reality,you may not like that dose or envy "...that look on your face your there in that
Place of delight and peace..."
And yet am i find my pen urging you to go ahead and explore on that feeling!
This write has come alive in an encounter i have just experienced minutes ago.Am still steaming off!!!lol!
Beautiful ink S.scape!!!
Place of delight and peace..."
And yet am i find my pen urging you to go ahead and explore on that feeling!
This write has come alive in an encounter i have just experienced minutes ago.Am still steaming off!!!lol!
Beautiful ink S.scape!!!
29th Jun 2014 5:47pm
Thankyou Your words mean so much to me I have the highest value on your words your honesty fills my soul with happiness thankyou
