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Hairy Armpits on Bus Woman
I've got nothing against it
Just don't sit next to me on the bus
As a silent protest I'm gonna wanna know
Either way, it's kinda gross
I mean this wasn't stubble
It was like a fucking forest in there
Like a car wreck I couldn't look away
After awhile I was pretty turned on
Chit chat and some city speak
I got her number
I'm thinking the Botanical Gardens on Saturday
Just don't sit next to me on the bus
As a silent protest I'm gonna wanna know
Either way, it's kinda gross
I mean this wasn't stubble
It was like a fucking forest in there
Like a car wreck I couldn't look away
After awhile I was pretty turned on
Chit chat and some city speak
I got her number
I'm thinking the Botanical Gardens on Saturday
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Re: Hairy Armpits on Bus Woman
27th Jun 2014 5:38am
Lmao, i couldn't help but laugh reading this! "Either way, it's kinda gross
I mean this wasn't stubble
It was like a fucking forest in there" ~ That was just great i read it several times! So you were intrigued by the hairy armpits ehh? Botanical Gardens are always a sure go!
I mean this wasn't stubble
It was like a fucking forest in there" ~ That was just great i read it several times! So you were intrigued by the hairy armpits ehh? Botanical Gardens are always a sure go!
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27th Jun 2014 10:27am
Re: Hairy Armpits on Bus Woman
That made my day! Can picture it easily by that vivid description. Made me laugh out loud! Djungle fever ...
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27th Jun 2014 10:29am
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27th Jun 2014 12:12pm
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Anonymous
27th Jun 2014 11:08am
This did make me laugh....it is a touchy subject for a lot of women but it was nice to see a humorous poem about it...:)
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Re: Hairy Armpits on Bus Woman
27th Jun 2014 11:17am
I thought it might touch a few nerves but went for it anyway. It was meant to be humorous ....
Glad you got a laugh
Thx foe reading and commenting
Glad you got a laugh
Thx foe reading and commenting
Re: Hairy Armpits on Bus Woman
27th Jun 2014 3:26pm
LOL if it's long enough to braid.. or flap in the breeze as she rides her bike on a sunny day.. then that is gross.. and not just "kinda" this read sooo made me laugh... thank you for sharing it...with love and respect...xoxo domore
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27th Jun 2014 6:14pm
Re: Hairy Armpits on Bus Woman
27th Jun 2014 5:24pm
when read earlier.....lmao.....very loudly.....in public.....
people wondering wtf is this woman on...
visuals very funny.....
is there nothing you will not sly smile at?
lol.....
people wondering wtf is this woman on...
visuals very funny.....
is there nothing you will not sly smile at?
lol.....
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27th Jun 2014 6:15pm
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Re: Hairy Armpits on Bus Woman
3rd Jul 2014 00:06am
This is fabulous! What makes it truly exquisite for me is the way you turn it on yourself so expertly, the rapier you so carefully shred the veneer of (construct of?) our societal expectations. I adore the way you so casually throw in your arousal and interest, how the hairy armpits lure you in, essentially. Okay, PoetSpeak, I'm starting to find you rather adorable...
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3rd Jul 2014 00:10am