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Caries
Many of my poems
sound bitter.
But sweet ones would only
cause you caries.
sound bitter.
But sweet ones would only
cause you caries.
Published 26th Jun 2014
| Edited 18th Dec 2014
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26th Jun 2014 11:56pm
27th Jun 2014 00:10am
Perhaps
I will.
Your comments are sweeter than my poems and I'm happy about that!
I will.
Your comments are sweeter than my poems and I'm happy about that!
27th Jun 2014 00:24am
I have a good dental plan and I will risk it. Write on Miss Chi, the sweeter the better.
27th Jun 2014 1:54pm
Anonymous
27th Jun 2014 00:27am
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27th Jun 2014 1:52pm
27th Jun 2014 1:21am
LEAVE? I will not leave
as long as I've
something to say.
So, please stay!
I'd go if you went.
xx
as long as I've
something to say.
So, please stay!
I'd go if you went.
xx
27th Jun 2014 6:13pm
27th Jun 2014 2:07am
... just write it Miss Chi, bitter or sweet - it all reflects a moment we want to share ... With that said - Thank you for this and everything else you've written ... Looking forward to more
27th Jun 2014 2:00pm
You are too kind, LSP! I'm truly moved and grateful to count you among my dear fellow poets which I much adore! Thank you!
27th Jun 2014 3:03am
sugar-free is the way to go, Chi. but you are still the sweetheart of the underground!...
27th Jun 2014 2:04pm
How sweet of you :-)! "The sweetheart of the underground", that sounds particularly nice! Thank you so much for you kind and encouraging support, always!
27th Jun 2014 1:55pm
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27th Jun 2014 2:15pm
Anonymous
27th Jun 2014 3:12pm
I care, count another vote!!!
(caries, lol, such irony)
(caries, lol, such irony)
27th Jun 2014 5:17pm
