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Sunset
The sun is slow and cautious. Sitting, letting.
Her head rests upon his shoulder. Shadows, ripples.
The tide comes to their feet. Clouds, dapples.
Her soul waits for love. Lightly, setting.
Her head rests upon his shoulder. Shadows, ripples.
The tide comes to their feet. Clouds, dapples.
Her soul waits for love. Lightly, setting.
Published 26th Jun 2014
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26th Jun 2014 5:22pm
This poem reminds me of sunset in Manila Bay where lovers watch the setting sun while holding hands and kissing! Good read...
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Oh those must be in the days long gone when one can still sit and watch the sunset at Manila Bay without being mugged or choked by air pollution! But I still love this country. :)
The photo was taken on Mactan Island, Cebu. :)
Thanks for the read and comment, VV, kabayan!
The photo was taken on Mactan Island, Cebu. :)
Thanks for the read and comment, VV, kabayan!
27th Jun 2014 4:47pm
You're welcome...Cebu is in my bucket list of places I want to visit when I go back home.
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30th Jun 2014 2:44am
Very soothing words. Love the photo too.
30th Jun 2014 3:53am
4th Jul 2014 5:55am
I. Love. This. You evoke my grandmother's poetry with this. Thank you. You have given me a gift of immense love. May you and your poems ever flourish, wondrous woman! :-*
4th Jul 2014 6:00am
Oh such evocations, poetry's magic. I am deeply honored, Savaja. Welcome to the underground.
4th Jul 2014 7:07am
Thank you for the welcome, absinthe. Poetry IS magic and the evocation of poetry is magic as well. Thank you for spinning the life wheel and sparking the magic, luv... :-*
4th Jul 2014 8:10am
