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And Then There Was Me
I professed my love to an eagle
only to have it fly over me and drop a deuce,
that my friends is the story of my life.
Shit, shit and more shit,
it's probably why I think everything stinks,
cause it actually fucking does.
only to have it fly over me and drop a deuce,
that my friends is the story of my life.
Shit, shit and more shit,
it's probably why I think everything stinks,
cause it actually fucking does.
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24th Jun 2014 11:08pm
Re: And Then There Was Me
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24th Jun 2014 11:36pm
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Re: And Then There Was Me
25th Jun 2014 3:31am
Lighting fire to that shit and burning down the house-Damn if You don't make me giggle over the most heartbreaking truths!!!
Ink On Hellion!!!
Ink On Hellion!!!
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Re: And Then There Was Me
Anonymous
25th Jun 2014 10:59am
First three lines are very good, drew me in!

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Re: And Then There Was Me
25th Jun 2014 4:48pm
things, such as this, could be worse.
or may
be (k)not.........wee trap ourselves to teach the
fckng shitbirds a lesson, &
the shitbirds just fly away,
absolutely unfazed
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Re: And Then There Was Me
26th Jun 2014 2:58am
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2nd Jul 2014 8:04am
Re: And Then There Was Me
Anonymous
8th Aug 2014 3:18am
Nice poem Nikki, feel the same way sometimes and couldn't say it any better than you have

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