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�spirall-IN-g

Plasmic darkness
out of bursting irises
Bores in your illuminati
knit with finesse traps
In a smothering
pervasiveness
�
Bl(urr/ind)ed intense
Inner the truth traverse

Written by summultima

(uma)

Published 22nd Jun 2014

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Re: �spirall-IN-g

mbass33 (matthew bass)

22nd Jun 2014 3:34pm

I like the contrast between light and dark and each couplet. It really gives the spiraling affect. Each Line stands alone and works together seamlessly