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thru and thru
thru and thru
I see YOU thru and thru
the georgete skirt
and veiled figure
IN SILK
I have Xray eyes
which view every inch
to savour
your inner
gives rise to heart beats first
then my sexy thirst
my younger brother within me
wants to thrust
all else is IMAGINASHUN
AT BEST AT WoRSE
AND BY THE TIME I REALISE WHAT HAS HAPPENED
I BURST
I see YOU thru and thru
the georgete skirt
and veiled figure
IN SILK
I have Xray eyes
which view every inch
to savour
your inner
gives rise to heart beats first
then my sexy thirst
my younger brother within me
wants to thrust
all else is IMAGINASHUN
AT BEST AT WoRSE
AND BY THE TIME I REALISE WHAT HAS HAPPENED
I BURST
Published 20th Jun 2014
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4th Jul 2014 3:15am
You have such provocative language and I really enjoy the style of your poetry. I am, however, lost at the end at times. Somehow, I lose the flow. It is as though you have gone somewhere entirely new and I cannot follow. This could be my flaw entirely. I may not have the vision to see the vista you present, although I feel less lost this time. Keep writing, again, you have a lyrical voice worthy of grand expression, luv. :-*
4th Jul 2014 2:00pm
thank you so much for your such a lovely comment I don't write my brain and compy combine and you know how that does my erotica define all love mine ere it does rise and all are wantonly surprised how again and again A G A I N does rise tis any one's surmise
the morning wood says
cummming again
and again this again!
the morning wood says
cummming again
and again this again!
