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Le' Boy in the Spastic Bubble
If I said it once
I'll say it a thousand times
feelin' like such a dunce
because I know you'll never be mine...
If I wished it twice
I'd wish it that many more
still...you're as cold as ice
frozen, by my whimsical amour...
I pray in increments of three
alone, lost in these dreams
where for once you finally see
circumstances changed, so it seems..,
Yet, it's just a mirage
Sprinklin' star dusted sparkles
across this soul's garage
n' once more hopes' the ghost's chime
that keeps wastin' my precious time
sentenced for life,
in this 'technicolor prism' of mind...
I'll say it a thousand times
feelin' like such a dunce
because I know you'll never be mine...
If I wished it twice
I'd wish it that many more
still...you're as cold as ice
frozen, by my whimsical amour...
I pray in increments of three
alone, lost in these dreams
where for once you finally see
circumstances changed, so it seems..,
Yet, it's just a mirage
Sprinklin' star dusted sparkles
across this soul's garage
n' once more hopes' the ghost's chime
that keeps wastin' my precious time
sentenced for life,
in this 'technicolor prism' of mind...
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Re: Le' Boy in the Spastic Bubble
19th Jun 2014 3:57pm
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20th Jun 2014 1:16am
Re: Le' Boy in the Spastic Bubble
19th Jun 2014 4:29pm
Beautifully sad! Your words always float like a magic carpet. Enjoyed! Xo :)
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20th Jun 2014 1:17am
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19th Jun 2014 7:02pm
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20th Jun 2014 1:19am
You're refreshing my sweetness! Thank you so much
I'm grateful for your continued support :)
I'm grateful for your continued support :)
Re: Le' Boy in the Spastic Bubble
*get out the spastic bubble and inhale in another direction, a direction where the air is...clearer....ah hhhh.* :)
Enjoyed your pen's confession, Poe. Your ink always has such depth Xo
Enjoyed your pen's confession, Poe. Your ink always has such depth Xo
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re: Re: Le' Boy in the Spastic Bubble
20th Jun 2014 1:21am
Lol yea I know my dear, funny enough that SCENT smells the same in either direction lol... Mucho appreciato mi Amiga! :)
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Anonymous
20th Jun 2014 4:41am
sweet poem, love the way you described this longing.
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20th Jun 2014 11:58am
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22nd Jun 2014 4:39am
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23rd Jun 2014 00:39am
I owe it to my mom, her sensitivity n intellect
was genetically passed on to me n my younger
bros. :) thank you my dear friend, always n forever
grateful :)
was genetically passed on to me n my younger
bros. :) thank you my dear friend, always n forever
grateful :)
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22nd Jun 2014 5:46am
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23rd Jun 2014 12:01pm
Re: Le' Boy in the Spastic Bubble
26th Jun 2014 5:44am
"Frozen,by my whimsical amour" that line stood out most to me...Simply Beautiful Poetic :) enjoyed as always
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27th Jun 2014 11:22pm
My precious lady, I thank you so much!
n I'm grateful always for ur sweet praise on my works :)
n I'm grateful always for ur sweet praise on my works :)
Re: Le' Boy in the Spastic Bubble
29th Jun 2014 4:13pm
Enjoyed from the first to the last line. You have a way with words, specially with the romantic ones. Love it, my dear Poe!
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re: Re: Le' Boy in the Spastic Bubble
30th Jun 2014 1:14pm
My sweet CHI, u FILL me with
'Light energy' :) thank you truly
N always my dear :)
'Light energy' :) thank you truly
N always my dear :)
Re: Le' Boy in the Spastic Bubble
30th Jun 2014 12:39pm
can i be so bold as to say am there with you.....
am working at letting go of desire and replacing it with need......not nearly as exciting.....
am working at letting go of desire and replacing it with need......not nearly as exciting.....
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re: Re: Le' Boy in the Spastic Bubble
30th Jun 2014 1:15pm
Baby be as BOLD as you want, I love that n I adore your thoughts n greatly appreciate your support! :)