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The Last Night (Inspired By "Coma White" Marilyn Manson)
Lock The Door..
Sit On The Floor,
Lay The Blade On The Floor..
Open The Pill Bottle Take A Few,The Four More Than Six More..
The Voices Start To Fade Away...
I Don't Want To Stay...
The Last Night..
The Memories All Come Back In A Flash..
Locking The Door...
Sitting On The Floor..
Opening The Pills...
Taking Four Than Six More..
Then Passing Out On The Floor..
Waking Up In A Daze,
Then Remembering The Blade...
A Slight Smile...
She New She'd Only Be Alive For A Little While...
She Grabs The Pills Pops Eight In Her Mouth,
Then Starts To Cut Away At Her Skin...
One For You...
Ten For You Daddy...
The Voices Slowly Fade Away Then She Pops Ten More Pills
She Knew This Was Her Last Night
Sit On The Floor,
Lay The Blade On The Floor..
Open The Pill Bottle Take A Few,The Four More Than Six More..
The Voices Start To Fade Away...
I Don't Want To Stay...
The Last Night..
The Memories All Come Back In A Flash..
Locking The Door...
Sitting On The Floor..
Opening The Pills...
Taking Four Than Six More..
Then Passing Out On The Floor..
Waking Up In A Daze,
Then Remembering The Blade...
A Slight Smile...
She New She'd Only Be Alive For A Little While...
She Grabs The Pills Pops Eight In Her Mouth,
Then Starts To Cut Away At Her Skin...
One For You...
Ten For You Daddy...
The Voices Slowly Fade Away Then She Pops Ten More Pills
She Knew This Was Her Last Night
Published 14th Jun 2014
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14th Jun 2014 8:23pm
Like what you did there with the lines. They were no extra details, and pretty concise. I usually hate rhyme schemes, but you made it work.
1st Feb 2024 11:24am
Hello Fallen_Angel. I see that you've been with DUP for a while so I went to one of your earlier poems. This is great. Dark, emotional, death ridden poem. I'm familiar with Marilyn Manson and have seen him live a bunch of times. Great flow.
