Drink

your audience is waiting ...

Thank you so much for the read and comment Ronnie2013!

lol....the audience won't be disappointed ; )

 ... and clapping. BRAVO!
Again: Good luck :-)!!!

Miss Chi, you are spoiling me!

Thank you ; )

visionary ...
erotic
gives all signs of pleasure
no vulgarity
equals all measures

measure for measure
ecstatic orgasmic
of mind body and sole
and as if each one is fishing
in the ordained hole

twas the feeling
that begets me
reading ur poetry

which tantamounts to cumming
lady
this is a seasoned comment
also posted as my erotica
to help guys and gals
achieve their desired end

the bat and balls clanging the valleys and as it rains they sigh!

aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!

good they came...

Thank you Again for the incredible compliment!

It always feels good to achieve a desired end.

yes it sure does

I really love this one, Lena! It reads like a winner.. ;) Xo

Oh Rain, I am truly humbled and honored by your words.....Your work is hard to beat ; )

Thank you greatly mi amor...xo

conquer the mind, the body follows. lyrical temptation...

mmmmm...yes....thank you John!

Exquisite, air-tight, nothing extraneous, nothing but the moment encapsulated in sheer artistry.

Coming from you, this is an honor
Thank you Candycrier!

Ms Lena, this is a concise, compelling, complete asssault on the senses.
I applaud you!

As I curtsy to your gracious comment....I want to also mention how proud I feel that it assaulted the senses...lol!

Thank you VP sir ; )

gulp,gulp,gulp...

That's right Mr. Hashman....drink up...lol!

It's great to see you
Thank you!

Oh so sweet.....and short, miss!

There you are Mr. Hawk
I definitely appreciate your comment because you write some awesome pieces ; )

Thank you!

Beautiful piece Ms. LENA!!
Great luck in the comp..!
Awesome read sweets!!

Sir Lancelott

Wow! Thank you Mr. Lance

The competition finished and this poem was a runner-up to Ms. Rain's poem (which is an incredible honor).

I'm pleased you enjoyed it and appreciate your read and comment!

The last line is priceless Lena, they do say to love truly and completely one has to allow themselves to be vulnerable.
Congratz on the runners up!

Thank you so much Rina!
It feels so good to have you visit again.

I'm not very much into erotic poetry though this really caught my attention. Good write.

Now it's time to take care of business, if ya know what I mean.

The fact that you took the time to read and comment is an honor sir.

I like your comment about getting down to business....cause I definitely don't play games.

Thank you

WOW how'd I miss this?! Awesomely penned
n sensually alluring!  :)

lol....well I'm glad you found it.

Gracias Poe!

Sensational, erotic short poem.  Great mind fuck for this male reader.  Well written Lena.

Thank you!
I'm glad you enjoyed it ; )

delicioso ink Lena... your words always eye candy to read :D

LOL....Thank you Magic, you made me blush ; ) ...and I appreciate the RL

Each word counts
I wish I could do that.
Thanx

I'm sure you are here for a reason. Words matter to you too.
Give it a shot and see what you can do.

Thank you
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