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the astronauts report it feels good

he was our hero, he
vowed allegiance to outermost
edges, he knapped flint in fork-
ed tongue forever, but forgot
how the climate there defies
standard applying of temperature

before the demons are named
and saved in the angelic
that shames mans inspiration
there is that which hasn't happened

yet

less than death, more than life
not entropy, stagnancy, kinetic energy
higher than ascended transcendence
lower than primordial chaotic stew

he was our antagonist, he
mistook isolation of self service
for some sort of importance, he
stowed away on a simple knot
thinking he tricked the fabric
lightbaron
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