deepundergroundpoetry.com
Taste
watch me lick your mind
your eyes feast on my bonbon
penetrate the taste
Written for the 'Eye Candy' (women's comp) competition hosted by DevlinDLC
your eyes feast on my bonbon
penetrate the taste
Written for the 'Eye Candy' (women's comp) competition hosted by DevlinDLC
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 6
reading list entries 0
comments 18
reads 1336
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: Taste
12th Jun 2014 10:08pm
You caught me with this double-layered poem, Lena.
"watch me lick you mind"
That's absolutely great in its subtlety.
Good luck for the comp, Sweets!
"watch me lick you mind"
That's absolutely great in its subtlety.
Good luck for the comp, Sweets!
0
re: Re: Taste
12th Jun 2014 10:34pm
Thank you Miss Chi!
Participating in a comp among a poetess like you
is an honor every time ; )
Participating in a comp among a poetess like you
is an honor every time ; )
Re: Taste
12th Jun 2014 11:46pm
All the best in the competition, Ms Lena.
Win or lose, this little gem is a true prize!
The best seventeen syllables I've read in a very long time.
Win or lose, this little gem is a true prize!
The best seventeen syllables I've read in a very long time.
1
re: Re: Taste
13th Jun 2014 4:19pm
Wow Thank you VP sir!
Coming from you it's an incredible honor
I appreciate it greatly ; )
Coming from you it's an incredible honor
I appreciate it greatly ; )
Re: Taste
13th Jun 2014 2:09am
I read this in the comp and immediately fell in love with it....Good luck in the comp, Lena! Xo
0
re: Re: Taste
Oh Ms Rain! Thank you!
You don't know how proud you have made me with a compliment like that....coming from someone I admire and am a huge fan of...like a dream ; )
Good luck to you in the Comp as well ; ) xoxo
You don't know how proud you have made me with a compliment like that....coming from someone I admire and am a huge fan of...like a dream ; )
Good luck to you in the Comp as well ; ) xoxo
Re: Taste
Anonymous
13th Jun 2014 3:52am
Sexy Lena......you sure did get this comp off to a sexy start. Enjoyed this. Good Luck! Xo :)
0
re: Re: Taste
13th Jun 2014 4:27pm
My dear and very sexy Flower, thank you so much!
Your work is very HOT and I'm working hard to get to your level ; )
Your work is very HOT and I'm working hard to get to your level ; )
Re: Taste
13th Jun 2014 5:54pm
re: Re: Taste
16th Jun 2014 3:17pm
re: re: Re: Taste
25th Nov 2014 3:08am
o i read this before
now i see
and some one said
women are all powerful
hence lawyers//politicians
don't give them more
than six inches
now i see
and some one said
women are all powerful
hence lawyers//politicians
don't give them more
than six inches
0
re: re: re: Re: Taste
25th Nov 2014 1:46pm
re: re: re: re: Re: Taste
26th Nov 2014 3:45am
Re: Taste
30th Jun 2014 6:13pm
re: Re: Taste
30th Jun 2014 6:43pm
LOL! Thank you so much Mr. Lance
It's an honor to have you stop by ; )
It's an honor to have you stop by ; )
re: re: Re: Taste
1st Jul 2014 11:42pm
Re: Taste
20th Nov 2014 2:13pm
Such a refined taste too. I'll evermore look at bourbon chocolates in a new way. Excellent writing.
0
re: Re: Taste
21st Nov 2014 2:27am