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True Love
It came to me fluttering on the breeze
Like a humming bird choosing
The perfect flower to sip it's nectar
It was invitingly sweet,
Innocent and new
The warm wave of love washed over me and
Carried me away into the clouds
My beauty
My sun
Warmed me with her smile and
I bathed in it every second
That I could and
I dreamed of great feats achieved
All in the name of love
(C) 2014 XMAR82 all Rights Reserved
Like a humming bird choosing
The perfect flower to sip it's nectar
It was invitingly sweet,
Innocent and new
The warm wave of love washed over me and
Carried me away into the clouds
My beauty
My sun
Warmed me with her smile and
I bathed in it every second
That I could and
I dreamed of great feats achieved
All in the name of love
(C) 2014 XMAR82 all Rights Reserved
Published 10th Jun 2014
| Edited 3rd Feb 2017
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10th Jun 2014 7:29pm
10th Jun 2014 8:48pm
I like that, thank you. It was one of the first poems I ever wrote. Much appreciated.
Anonymous
10th Jun 2014 8:35pm
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10th Jun 2014 8:52pm
I'm glad you liked it. This is one of my earlier writes. I don't publish my poems in order. Thank you for stopping by.
10th Jun 2014 10:03pm
This poem contains such a lightness which you feel mostly at the beginning of a love affair when butterfly wings stroke the inside of your stomach. Wonderful.
10th Jun 2014 10:11pm
11th Jun 2014 10:40am
When we step out in that world where all possibility lies before us - beauty joy greatness - it is an innocence that somehow to carry on we must preserve in the face of it all - sublimely captured here bro'
11th Jun 2014 5:03pm
I think so. A bit for ourselves to covet from the world. Glad you liked it. Than you for your comments.
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- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
27th Jul 2014 7:13am
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27th Jul 2014 9:34pm
