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she accused him of being self centred...
just for once, she said, think of
somebody else...
so I did, but she didn't like it...
somebody else...
so I did, but she didn't like it...
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Re: she accused him of being self centred...
10th Jun 2014 00:42am
re: Re: she accused him of being self centred...
10th Jun 2014 00:58am
Re: she accused him of being self centred...
10th Jun 2014 1:15am
OOooops--
guess
you thought
about
the wrong...one
I couldn't help but smile(in empathy)at this one, mo Chara!
guess
you thought
about
the wrong...one
I couldn't help but smile(in empathy)at this one, mo Chara!
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re: Re: she accused him of being self centred...
10th Jun 2014 1:30am
Re: she accused him of being self centred...
10th Jun 2014 2:12am
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10th Jun 2014 12:03pm
Re: she accused him of being self centred...
10th Jun 2014 4:09am
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10th Jun 2014 12:04pm
Re: she accused him of being self centred...
10th Jun 2014 5:03am
re: Re: she accused him of being self centred...
10th Jun 2014 12:06pm
Re: she accused him of being self centred...
10th Jun 2014 4:23pm
o, you funnyboy, you......
remember: "Always Sell Fish!"
having the world-on-a-string
(damn...you sure rack up the reg'lr reads---
you
+ a rotating line of 1-2 others is all I'm worth.
Bless ye for Being There(or Here) for me)
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re: Re: she accused him of being self centred...
10th Jun 2014 8:11pm
I'd have you on the
required reading list
of every orthodox
examination board
across the land..:)
thanks, Dan...
required reading list
of every orthodox
examination board
across the land..:)
thanks, Dan...
re: re: Re: she accused him of being self centred...
11th Jun 2014 5:52am
aha....
orthodoxymoron well befitteth the
Paradoxymoron
paradigm.....well, wait-a-minute,
I needs
to ponder this more
orthodoxymoron well befitteth the
Paradoxymoron
paradigm.....well, wait-a-minute,
I needs
to ponder this more
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Re: she accused him of being self centred...
With this, you made my evening. Regards from my husband, he loves it, too (I read the poem to him)! Wonderful, Paul!
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re: Re: she accused him of being self centred...
10th Jun 2014 10:46pm
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12th Jun 2014 9:57pm
Re: she accused him of being self centred...
11th Jun 2014 2:00am
reminds me of a piece i published here once. it wasn't received very well. i like it.
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re: Re: she accused him of being self centred...
11th Jun 2014 2:08am
I'd like to see it...
bet it's more cleverly
nuanced than mine...
thanks, Patrick..:)
bet it's more cleverly
nuanced than mine...
thanks, Patrick..:)
re: re: Re: she accused him of being self centred...
oh, i was thinking of my "snapshot reconsidered" piece, which is on page four of four of my published pieces here.
your poem has much more charm, i think...
and it has additional meaning.
your poem has much more charm, i think...
and it has additional meaning.
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