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" GET LEGS LIKE A SKATEBOARDER....
...Back in the old days, skateboarding used to be considered a dude’s sport. But these days, ladies on wheels are making big moves. (And we don’t mean falling to your back as the board flies out from underneath you.)---
Die (Like All of Your Favorite Characters) in the Next Game of Thrones Book!....."(these x'erps=unpaid advertings of things wee need [to] be
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an imag
inary elder rela
tive , now long dead , long ago, was
oft
heard t'say "don't eat that candy ! it makes yOur
mind
blind !"
whilst
dan
cing thee streets of d'ol'SoutBrooklyn
neighborhood ----- in
retr
ospect, Ieye canno re
collect the name or gender of this
venerated
e l d er ---- was
she/he imaginary? or visionary? Did
his/her
whiteboots fortell thee cumming of
the go
go
girls?or just wee gone'gone ggggguys?
was thisperson an
auntie?or annnnnnnuncle?where'd
thisperson get all them sub
way
tokens that
she/he would
pass out in passing to
the now past(some genuinely passed)
neighneighbo'ood
child
ren like eggheadDanny, dopeyJimmyMagoo &
his cute sister maryAnn,
joey&gerard(br'others), joeyOliva, & his
fatsweatty sisterPattiAnn.........
"Here....take a ride,take-a-ride in The Underground Bowels
of thee unnnnnnnnderworld
of our great & famished Broooooooklyn!"
this was the only legacy left hovering over
the blood splattered
bl oo d sppppattered
playworld playground
of a plethoral armoury of toygun copn/robbers, cowbo/injuns,
good'erikans vs. JapsNazis(fckn)russiacubanCommies.........
& [ in
winter wee praised our
Catho'lic God for our
handgrenades made of
snow ]
wee knew & knowed what wee was made of......not (un) like
th'goddamn kids
of fcknamerika
Today ----
(ykin look-it-up!
(ykin look'it'up!
(ykin look &
never see shit...like wee do allatime )
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dkzk2014"blizzfulFakeReminiscences" is entitled th'FOTO:byDkzk
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Die (Like All of Your Favorite Characters) in the Next Game of Thrones Book!....."(these x'erps=unpaid advertings of things wee need [to] be
___________________________________________________________
an imag
inary elder rela
tive , now long dead , long ago, was
oft
heard t'say "don't eat that candy ! it makes yOur
mind
blind !"
whilst
dan
cing thee streets of d'ol'SoutBrooklyn
neighborhood ----- in
retr
ospect, Ieye canno re
collect the name or gender of this
venerated
e l d er ---- was
she/he imaginary? or visionary? Did
his/her
whiteboots fortell thee cumming of
the go
go
girls?or just wee gone'gone ggggguys?
was thisperson an
auntie?or annnnnnnuncle?where'd
thisperson get all them sub
way
tokens that
she/he would
pass out in passing to
the now past(some genuinely passed)
neighneighbo'ood
child
ren like eggheadDanny, dopeyJimmyMagoo &
his cute sister maryAnn,
joey&gerard(br'others), joeyOliva, & his
fatsweatty sisterPattiAnn.........
"Here....take a ride,take-a-ride in The Underground Bowels
of thee unnnnnnnnderworld
of our great & famished Broooooooklyn!"
this was the only legacy left hovering over
the blood splattered
bl oo d sppppattered
playworld playground
of a plethoral armoury of toygun copn/robbers, cowbo/injuns,
good'erikans vs. JapsNazis(fckn)russiacubanCommies.........
& [ in
winter wee praised our
Catho'lic God for our
handgrenades made of
snow ]
wee knew & knowed what wee was made of......not (un) like
th'goddamn kids
of fcknamerika
Today ----
(ykin look-it-up!
(ykin look'it'up!
(ykin look &
never see shit...like wee do allatime )
*************************************************************
dkzk2014"blizzfulFakeReminiscences" is entitled th'FOTO:byDkzk
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Published 9th Jun 2014
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9th Jun 2014 5:16pm
Dear wee 1969 wife - hurt - ling down the ramp of the dairy barn on a board nailed to iron skate wheels...gravel palms and tears down her sweet oval face.
9th Jun 2014 9:10pm
them was the real skate boards
thanks for reading & admitting to it
9th Jun 2014 11:10pm
Nearest I ever got
was roller skates, bit
scarey, and ice skates,
bloody terrifying...
was roller skates, bit
scarey, and ice skates,
bloody terrifying...
Anonymous
9th Jun 2014 11:29pm
I can read, and re-read, and it still doesn't make any sense but damn does it sound good! Excellent, Sir DanielX, for always giving my head a good spin. . .xo, Devlin.
10th Jun 2014 2:46pm
Sense?
who needs sense? seems wee are all choking & suffocating in this expectation of "making sense" & things making sense to us.
since my rather radical emergency heart surgery 14 years ago, the 'normal' world that we view as making sense has
been painfully bizarre living in this material insanity that we've been collectively creating around our addiction to delusions of self,& pleasure, & escape from the suffering that we paradoxically create by allowing ego such total reign, & how we go thru the motions prescribed by a horrible collective & individual ego-karma. "I" am no-less a partner in this than ever, yet this glitch in in neurologic-patterning that's evolved in my freakin bone-dome paralyzes my ability to participate. My Delusion of the sadness, sorrow, & suffering behind all our smiley, POSITIVE ~'I-know-My-Self','I-am-a-Free-self-enclosed human bean & deserving whatever ego indulgences my ego needs, even if it compounds the suffering of Others(oft unseen, unilaterally denied)....& then there are those Of Us who just recoil from the insane norm into another insane norm of blatant self-destructiveness, slow or fast, creating more psychic trauma, waving the same dumb flag of Pride, while being trapped by the same disconsciousness of a dualistic Reality....
how's that for 'bla bla bla'? -- no wonder I cain't find me 'real-time,real-life' girlfriend nowhow, eh? Ha! Yeah, big boy.......
So, in my 'damaged' brain striving to 'make sense' (which is reflecting other's ego agendas back at them as a 'comforting' gesture of illusion), is nigh-on impossible.
Got that? (aiyeeeeeeeee!-the wail of the madcapped pariah!)
well, it's all just showbiz. Youghta look me up on fckng FB & check out my other un'sensible music & shit......(warning: I may use this as my next Prose Poem)....
thank ye, dear
