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Surrounded
I would say
I understand women
Every woman I've ever loved
Has been strong and willful
That has led to other battles
But the premise of love
Is a capturing of souls
Protection and unity
It's hard sometimes to
appreciate all that is not seen
Take for granted what is apparent
Living in motion, one dream, one you
I understand women
Every woman I've ever loved
Has been strong and willful
That has led to other battles
But the premise of love
Is a capturing of souls
Protection and unity
It's hard sometimes to
appreciate all that is not seen
Take for granted what is apparent
Living in motion, one dream, one you
Published 8th Jun 2014
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Anonymous
8th Jun 2014 12:45pm
I like this, you make a lot of sense
8th Jun 2014 12:50pm
Anonymous
8th Jun 2014 12:52pm
Me too
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8th Jun 2014 8:50pm
Surrounded by love and understanding, the perfect dream of fullfillment. Tender approach, Speak, beautifully done.
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Anonymous
12th Jan 2015 3:04pm
oh this....i do not have words.
so good, cowboy. so good.
so good, cowboy. so good.
12th Jan 2015 8:37pm
thank you
as I'm reading the ones you have commented on, I realize back a year ago it was so much more about the content. I somehow lost my way the last few months. Have to get back to my core.
Thanks so much ...
as I'm reading the ones you have commented on, I realize back a year ago it was so much more about the content. I somehow lost my way the last few months. Have to get back to my core.
Thanks so much ...
Anonymous
12th Jan 2015 8:42pm
so you strip off the shit that you don't like and get back to where you were. i like this PS, i like this PS quite a bit.
and you are very welcome.
and you are very welcome.
12th Jan 2015 10:12pm
I know how to listen, you find out so much more when you stop to hear the words
