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Story of Dorothy Hale
Dorothy Hale, fancy & frail
Was drawn to men with money
She made her way to Hollywood
The land of milk & honey.
Dorothy Hale attracted the male
A lady, sultry & slick
A beautiful young actress
Who couldn’t act a lick.
Dorothy Hale, remark & regale
Threw a party for her friends
To announce her long, long trip
And achieve her final ends.
Dorothy Hale, stodgy & stale
An angel without a halo
Her sixteen story fall was
Immortalized by Frieda Kahlo.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dorothy_Hale
Published 7th Jun 2014
| Edited 7th Oct 2015
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7th Jun 2014 2:00am
7th Jun 2014 2:43am
A Classic tragedy here eh John=Excellence!!!
This was a figure I had grown up knowing the name of, but never knowing the story--Dig Your Mirth in bleak-and Frida what a pic!!! She captures Macabre as well!!!
This was a figure I had grown up knowing the name of, but never knowing the story--Dig Your Mirth in bleak-and Frida what a pic!!! She captures Macabre as well!!!
7th Jun 2014 3:49am
thank you, your limerick-like poem introduced me first to dorothy hale. i readed about her just. and i somehow pity her for she is so cruely sarcastically perceived and her life deserved nouph as just a sardonic comics-tone dedications..not every woman has guts to be suffragette..
7th Jun 2014 7:11am
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7th Jun 2014 8:33am
I like how you unwound this one and went balls out in the end..nice effect.
enjoyed the read :)
enjoyed the read :)
7th Jun 2014 5:48pm
Tragedy in the worst way. Some angels try to fly outside of the fantasy. A stark reminder that reality rules the day. Thank you for this.
7th Jun 2014 6:10pm
7th Jun 2014 7:38pm
8th Jun 2014 6:33am
well i sure learned something new this morning :)
i liked the form here, Mister Feddeler, the limerick-like style makes it an almost satirical social commentary. enjoyed.
i liked the form here, Mister Feddeler, the limerick-like style makes it an almost satirical social commentary. enjoyed.
8th Jun 2014 7:36am
8th Jun 2014 10:14pm
This one reads like a perverted nursery rhyme, with a wonderfully cynical last line. The penultimate verse is clunky, but I enjoyed this poem.
9th Jun 2014 4:17am
I do not know about the woman you write about.
But I do know that I love your talent John..
Nicely put together for sure!!!
Broom ")
But I do know that I love your talent John..
Nicely put together for sure!!!
Broom ")
9th Jun 2014 5:06am
This is great man. An angel with a broken wing as Jimmy Page would say. But yea dope shit man!
"Dorothy Hale, stodgy & stale
An angel without a halo" --Great
"Dorothy Hale, stodgy & stale
An angel without a halo" --Great
7th Oct 2016 9:07am
Loved the style of this piece,John,and Dorothy Hale,so interesting. Nice choice of art....
