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The Next Level
His face was perfection.
Love colored his eyes and
Passion filled his lips.
And he knew just as I did,
This was the moment
Everything changed.
Love colored his eyes and
Passion filled his lips.
And he knew just as I did,
This was the moment
Everything changed.
Published 6th Jun 2014
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7th Jun 2014 6:30pm
That's a Beautiful feeling once achieved!!
Great write Ms. Passion!!
Love your pen sweets!!!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write Ms. Passion!!
Love your pen sweets!!!!
Sir Lancelott
11th Jun 2014 00:58am
9th Jun 2014 10:46pm
Nice Passion.I especially love the line, " Love colored his eyes". That is very poetic.
11th Jun 2014 00:57am
