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Rightly Stoned
the tea is good,
the outside sweet,
the canvas bleeds
with deadly bones,
the numbing pain,
the box a rain,
It feels good to be,
so rightly stoned.
Published 5th Jun 2014
| Edited 29th May 2016
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6th Jun 2014 00:40am
"Rightly Stoned"
I cannot explain how awesome this line is. The double meanings and all. I like how poem is structured.
I cannot explain how awesome this line is. The double meanings and all. I like how poem is structured.
Spitz, I'm glad you got the meaning of the piece as a whole. A large part of that was the simple structure and ordinary phrases. Thank you;cheers.
