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scared little girl
She's scared to say how she feels
when it comes to this man
he has a girl and well shes lonely
they spend time together but not enough
she wants more and he says he does
he plays with her mind as well as her heart
she believe what he says
but then get pushes off
he has a girl
which should make her back off
when she stops
he comes and shows her what she thinks love
she's cried here and their
she's lost inlove without as sense to even care
she wants him
she wants to tell him[b]
and shout it out to the world
but deep down inside shes just a scared little girl[/b]
when it comes to this man
he has a girl and well shes lonely
they spend time together but not enough
she wants more and he says he does
he plays with her mind as well as her heart
she believe what he says
but then get pushes off
he has a girl
which should make her back off
when she stops
he comes and shows her what she thinks love
she's cried here and their
she's lost inlove without as sense to even care
she wants him
she wants to tell him[b]
and shout it out to the world
but deep down inside shes just a scared little girl[/b]
Published 27th May 2014
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28th May 2014 8:51pm
Cool subject it sucks right when you are willing to love someone unconditionally yet they want something else but pretend to love you back.
Two lines from the poem I didn't really understand.
"but then get pushes off"
"he comes and shows her what she thinks love"
Two lines from the poem I didn't really understand.
"but then get pushes off"
"he comes and shows her what she thinks love"
30th May 2014 00:29am
"but then gets pushes off"
what i mean is like he rejects her i could of definitely worded it better
"he comes and shows her what she thinks love"
and what i mean by that is she does not know the meaning of love only what she's see's in movies and reads in books
thank you i hope you have a bit of a better understanding <3
what i mean is like he rejects her i could of definitely worded it better
"he comes and shows her what she thinks love"
and what i mean by that is she does not know the meaning of love only what she's see's in movies and reads in books
thank you i hope you have a bit of a better understanding <3
29th May 2014 7:08am
30th May 2014 00:29am
